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Just then
`When you left just then'
I got really scared,
I am glad your home,
I was, scared without you, there
I was,.. nervous if I would see you again,
'I am just a stupid man'
Published 22nd Apr 2016
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23rd Apr 2016 1:53pm
1st May 2016 4:39am
Hello Bloody Tears; Simple but powerful, I like that,,, was actually going for simplicity but clear strong writing, very right on... How are you doing...
25th Apr 2016 10:34am
1st May 2016 4:40am
Was going for a clear and concise write, dig that it was felt, very right on.,.
