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Just then

`When you left just then'

I got really scared,

I am glad your home,

I was, scared without you, there

I was,.. nervous if I would see you again,

'I am just a stupid man'

Written by deadwolf

Published 22nd Apr 2016

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Re. Just then

BloodyTears

23rd Apr 2016 1:53pm

Simple but powerful.

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deadwolf

1st May 2016 4:39am

Hello Bloody Tears; Simple but powerful, I like that,,, was actually going for simplicity but clear strong writing, very right on... How are you doing...