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Slow

Visual Poem Slow

marielavoue

Written by marielavoue

(Gypsy Red)

Published 20th Apr 2016

#erotic #sex

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Re. Slow

20th Apr 2016 9:07pm

very nice poem "dip and rise" mm... brilliant!

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marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

21st Apr 2016 2:08pm

Thank you, glad you enjoyed this post!

Red

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Re. Slow

20th Apr 2016 9:57pm

Favourite line, beside "Dip and rise":

I slip and you slide

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marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

21st Apr 2016 2:09pm

Thanks, appreciate your feedback!

Red

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Poetikmind (_---_)

20th Apr 2016 10:34pm

Was that word "humors?" Bumors? Inquiring minds gotta know!!! lol anyhow, this was slick, silky hotness!! :)

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marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

21st Apr 2016 2:11pm

Lol Poe (((smh)))happy you thought so lol thanks for stopping by to read 💋

Red

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iwanttogetithard (iwantit)

23rd Jun 2016 5:04am

I love the picture.

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marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

24th Jun 2016 2:13am

Thank you.

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Re. Slow

6th Aug 2016 1:51pm

Delicious ink!

I slip, you slide > love it!

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marielavoue (Gypsy Red)

6th Aug 2016 1:56pm

Thank you! 😊

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