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SpeechLick
Speechless at what to say-
you’ve tied my tongue with the rush of your throb
gliding across my peppermint spit like jazz harmonizing
a refined beat.
I rather be…
observing the words I couldn’t vocalize vanish
in each low bass of a kernel groove.
Witness you pulling me in musically
to your very own rhythm & blues-
beating against my lipstick and saturated smile.
You should…
grant me access into this universe of honey pearls
you love garlanded across my damp breasts.
Thrust…that sinfully sly serpent deep within my Eden-
leaving me no option but to eat my lust like
the whorish red fruit that tempted my yearning
to taste you in the first place.
Falling tenderly onto those swollen satchels
that protect the seeds of your passion,
giving me two reasons I should retreat from my
phallic persuasion, just to breathe again.
I want to…
Scavenge for vestiges of erotic preludes,
lustfully wait for your glistening crown to erupt
against my famished lips.
Eagerly coaxing your swell towards the outskirts of my throat
while my words get lost in-between chokes from your pelvic push.
I won’t stop greedily sucking until I find the carnal language
that speaks your history.
See…
I don’t mind being speechless
or having my tongue tied into intricate knots of
‘suck slowly’, if it means my mouth has your
thick conceit warmly imprisoned,
with no possibility of early ‘release’ from my lip’s grip…
anytime soon.
Rain~
Published 18th Apr 2016
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18th Apr 2016 3:28pm
You have me thoroughly captivated. And this hold you have on me goes all the way back to Eden. With the first temptation of the forbidden fruit. Stirs me up inside and keeps me wanting more. Excellent read. Thank You
20th Apr 2016 2:32am
I think that hold applies to all women when it pertains to men. lol.. Thankya 3P! Appreciate the visit....
18th Apr 2016 5:09pm
The absolutely finest juxtaposition of words and images from the depths of her creative mind. You never cease to amaze me. To take me down memory lane so to speak. Eloquent, yet erotic. an old cliche of mine, never the less. "I'm diggin' this like an old soul record"
Musically, Mr M
Musically, Mr M
I love those old skool' soul records myself. Nice to see you window shopping my ink again, A! Appreciate the lovely words and listing her. :) Thank You!
Anonymous
18th Apr 2016 6:02pm
What a slippery slope of salacious sentiments sensuously displayed through such an eloquent quill..had to slow my reading to savor your poetic nuances ...a Rain of inspiration you are lady. .
Much respect! !!
Much respect! !!
20th Apr 2016 2:45am
18th Apr 2016 7:03pm
Oohhhh Mmmmmmyyyy! Teach me the language of speechlessness that you have mastered. Enslave me with your verse... You achieve a royal flush with a hand that creates poetry to rule the Kingdom of Erotica!
This is how I dream to be able to write passionate verse of fire and desire. My last effort "unseen in a dream" pales in comparison to the majesty in your flowing ink.
JJ
This is how I dream to be able to write passionate verse of fire and desire. My last effort "unseen in a dream" pales in comparison to the majesty in your flowing ink.
JJ
20th Apr 2016 2:46am
I always have the biggest grin plastered across my face after reading your response(s). You do know how to make me blush JJ! Not sure if I read “Unseen in a dream”… but I’ll look for it…. Thanks hun…
18th Apr 2016 8:32pm
The lioness need not roar to get attention....just purr...& you purr in the most amazing ways...if you read one of these i think i would melt into a puddle....
20th Apr 2016 2:47am
purrrrrr it is…..lol.. I might do a voice over on my next erotica, just for you… ;) Thanks, T!
20th Apr 2016 3:52am
18th Apr 2016 8:39pm
The amazing picture that you've created with just these words! WOW! Truly amazing... *snaps*
20th Apr 2016 2:48am
I love your excitement, pg! :) So happy you enjoyed it enough to list it. Welcome to DU, and I appreciate the add and lyrical support thus far…..
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18th Apr 2016 8:42pm
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18th Apr 2016 8:56pm
20th Apr 2016 00:40am
Wow! I'm...... I'm... speechless! <-- pun intended! ;)
This was amazing, tod! Hella' sexy! I'm so excited it provoked inspiration. Damn! Thankya!
This was amazing, tod! Hella' sexy! I'm so excited it provoked inspiration. Damn! Thankya!
18th Apr 2016 9:01pm
Favourite lines:
You should…
grant me access into this universe of honey pearls
you love garlanded across my damp breasts.
Thrust…that sinfully sly serpent deep within my Eden-
You should…
grant me access into this universe of honey pearls
you love garlanded across my damp breasts.
Thrust…that sinfully sly serpent deep within my Eden-
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18th Apr 2016 11:50pm
OMG!!!! Heellll yea!!! Strangle that monster baby I'm ok with that lol
Whew... *runs quickly to find a huge ice bucket for the HEAD lol
Whew... *runs quickly to find a huge ice bucket for the HEAD lol
20th Apr 2016 2:51am
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Anonymous
28th Apr 2016 3:26pm
Sonsista, please forgive my absence and tardy comment, have been a bit distracted lately...
"Falling tenderly onto those swollen satchels
that protect the seeds of your passion,
giving me two reasons I should retreat from my
phallic persuasion, just to breathe again."
~ Left me with mouth agape gasping perhaps *almost as hard as you....
Saluting your pen my dear!
With love - Taryn xoxo
"Falling tenderly onto those swollen satchels
that protect the seeds of your passion,
giving me two reasons I should retreat from my
phallic persuasion, just to breathe again."
~ Left me with mouth agape gasping perhaps *almost as hard as you....
Saluting your pen my dear!
With love - Taryn xoxo
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