deepundergroundpoetry.com
In Praise of "Her"
Poetry
Is what makes me
Me
Turns my insides "out" for the world to see
Lets me express
that which really drives me
Be it Anger
Disgust
Pain
Or the throes of Ecstasy
The sugar
that makes life easier to swallow
It frees my mind
and my ass does follow
Many thanks to RainC and "Taste of Her"
Is what makes me
Me
Turns my insides "out" for the world to see
Lets me express
that which really drives me
Be it Anger
Disgust
Pain
Or the throes of Ecstasy
The sugar
that makes life easier to swallow
It frees my mind
and my ass does follow
Many thanks to RainC and "Taste of Her"
Published 15th Apr 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 0
comments 12
reads 787
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
15th Apr 2016 6:10pm
I like it, it puts me in the same mindset I was in when I wrote Poetry is Reality. I love it!
16th Apr 2016 12:31pm
15th Apr 2016 10:01pm
Love the serious nature of this ensued by a twist of humor.
That's poetry - it lightens the load of carrying it.
That's poetry - it lightens the load of carrying it.
16th Apr 2016 12:33pm
Thank You, Ahavati. I need the humor to keep my ego in check. Occasionally, I am just a little pretentious
17th Apr 2016 1:45am
A short but very good piece...
It was rhythmic, concise, n topical
n that makes for amazing stuff as far as I'm concerned :)
It was rhythmic, concise, n topical
n that makes for amazing stuff as far as I'm concerned :)
17th Apr 2016 12:28pm
Why thank you. You are very kind. And this time I believe you are correct.
18th Apr 2016 5:02am
18th Apr 2016 3:32pm
19th Apr 2016 1:24am
Sir I so understand the need to write..
beautifully expressed and inked..
with respect Crimsin
beautifully expressed and inked..
with respect Crimsin
19th Apr 2016 6:09pm
Thank you for you positive energy, Crimsin. You and my other critiquiers will create a real poet of me yet.
25th Apr 2016 4:46pm
"The sugar
that makes life easier to swallow "
Yeah, ain't it just.
i use poetry as a form of therapy too, so i know where you're coming from.
You are a poet, a cursory glance of your work makes that plain.
that makes life easier to swallow "
Yeah, ain't it just.
i use poetry as a form of therapy too, so i know where you're coming from.
You are a poet, a cursory glance of your work makes that plain.
26th Apr 2016 1:37am
Thank You for coming to see me Northern1. Glad to have another kindred spirit
