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Dreaming of Helsinki
Never been there
Feeling the calling
Cool, gray and dank
Raw
Matches my persona
My shirt too
Feeling the calling
Cool, gray and dank
Raw
Matches my persona
My shirt too
Published 13th Apr 2016
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13th Apr 2016 11:02pm
Time to venture out eh Poet?
Your words paint a many layered picture though my tongue stumbled on the second line...can I suggest 'call' instead of 'calling'?
Your words paint a many layered picture though my tongue stumbled on the second line...can I suggest 'call' instead of 'calling'?
Sometimes I wish I could pick up the phone and call you, to discuss matters of state ...
Left calling but did a different edit
Left calling but did a different edit
13th Apr 2016 11:58pm
I love the feel of this write Poet feels like walking through a misty fog..
an adventure painted to perfection with a few choice words..
love..
Brenda
an adventure painted to perfection with a few choice words..
love..
Brenda
14th Apr 2016 00:14am
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28th Apr 2016 12:39pm
LMAO! ... Love the last line, but I can't say Helsinki is on my bucket list. I'll await your travel report.
28th Apr 2016 7:42pm
