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Miracle
looked upon you from clouds above
can see you smiling back at me
we trade happy thoughts of luv
single tear rolled off my cheek
at the same time I felt your soul leak
both tears traveled in the breeze
as your blue and my purple tear collided
lightening streaked and thunder sounded
sky began to darken and weep
I was frightened loosing sight of your beautiful face
sent down prayers then spread my wings to shield you
then I heard a voice, "she is strong, she will be alright"
knew this familiar voice that has never failed me
a smile appeared on His face and all went calm in my heart
looked back down at you as I witnessed a miracle
earth was dark except where you stood
sky was pouring tears but you remained dry
all the Angels gathered around with wings spread
standing there with closed eyes reaching towards me
you were singing a song that we used to sing together
your angelic voice demanded silenced attention
felt another tear drip from my soul
slowly it drifted to touch you with my luv
your beautiful spirit glowed like a rare jewel
I heard Him sigh, then all went black
realizing I was dreaming that you still feel and miss me
as I still feel and miss you
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
can see you smiling back at me
we trade happy thoughts of luv
single tear rolled off my cheek
at the same time I felt your soul leak
both tears traveled in the breeze
as your blue and my purple tear collided
lightening streaked and thunder sounded
sky began to darken and weep
I was frightened loosing sight of your beautiful face
sent down prayers then spread my wings to shield you
then I heard a voice, "she is strong, she will be alright"
knew this familiar voice that has never failed me
a smile appeared on His face and all went calm in my heart
looked back down at you as I witnessed a miracle
earth was dark except where you stood
sky was pouring tears but you remained dry
all the Angels gathered around with wings spread
standing there with closed eyes reaching towards me
you were singing a song that we used to sing together
your angelic voice demanded silenced attention
felt another tear drip from my soul
slowly it drifted to touch you with my luv
your beautiful spirit glowed like a rare jewel
I heard Him sigh, then all went black
realizing I was dreaming that you still feel and miss me
as I still feel and miss you
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Miracle
13th Apr 2016 8:10pm
lovely Flower a majestic beauty and precious gem you've inked here..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. Miracle
13th Apr 2016 8:15pm
Precious Soul........what a smile to see you upon my page once again.......thank you for your luvng words and thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo ;)
Re: Re. Miracle
13th Apr 2016 8:17pm
Hey Kavik.......I'm glad you luved this one.......it good to write this one......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Miracle
13th Apr 2016 10:32pm
Yes, for sure, flower, those are the kind of dreams
which are kind to us. Not like those which bring
sadness and pain. When I have a dream such as
this one I have to get out of bed and walk around,
from room to room to let it settle inside of me.
which are kind to us. Not like those which bring
sadness and pain. When I have a dream such as
this one I have to get out of bed and walk around,
from room to room to let it settle inside of me.
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Re: Re. Miracle
14th Apr 2016 00:40am
Hey SG.......thank you for your thoughts.......I rather have sweet dreams like this than nightmares where I don't go back to sleep.......LOL!!! I've had a few of those where they scared me to go to sleep hours after.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Miracle
14th Apr 2016 8:49am
Can't tell if this is a story of two lovers separated by death or a mother and child, but it is deeply emotional from sadness to happiness. Hugs and purple blue luv!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. Miracle
14th Apr 2016 12:55pm
Hey JJ.......I always luv your soulful thoughts.......it could be either......a soul missing another who they luv......I believe dreams are the cocsience side of our soul......I see souls I haven't seen in a while there......some have past on some have not......but they're still in my heart........thank you......you always bring more thoughts to my write for me.......purple blue luv & hugs back to ya xo :)
Re. Miracle
14th Apr 2016 3:09pm
This is really good. touches me beneath my armor, but doesn't make me feel exposed
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Re: Re. Miracle
14th Apr 2016 3:12pm
Hey FB......so glad this touched you......thank you.....purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Miracle
14th Apr 2016 6:37pm
You've got a gentle and soothing touch, Flower. I always feel a little renewed when I read your lines.
"earth was dark except where you stood
sky was pouring tears but you remained dry
all the Angels gathered around with wings spread"
I'm sure the Angels smile on "Miracle." You're kind of one yourself!
"earth was dark except where you stood
sky was pouring tears but you remained dry
all the Angels gathered around with wings spread"
I'm sure the Angels smile on "Miracle." You're kind of one yourself!
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24th Apr 2016 10:48pm
Awe Crow.......your words have touched me very much.......souls like you are why I stay here......I'm honored you feel renewed by my words......I think you're neato!! Thank you for making me smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Miracle
Anonymous
14th Apr 2016 9:46pm
Beautiful Sun Kissed, always displaying the power of faith and love and what strength it can behold...lovely scribe my dear...take a bow...With love - Sweet S xo :)
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24th Apr 2016 11:07pm
Awe Sweet S.......I'm so blushing by your words.......I have faith in luv.....it heals pain that once existed within......now it makes me smile.......bowing before your presence in humbleness......thank you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Miracle
15th Apr 2016 1:48am
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24th Apr 2016 11:09pm
Sexy Rain.....making me smile deep within my heart.......thrilled you enjoyed this one.......thank you....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Miracle
15th Apr 2016 8:26pm
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24th Apr 2016 11:11pm
Hey David...always thrilled to see your smile upon my ink......happy you enjoyed......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Miracle
16th Apr 2016 5:44am
I agree with poetryman, I couldn't tell if it was a lover or a mother and child. I love that because it could be either and it's so elegantly and softly spoken.
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Re: Re. Miracle
24th Apr 2016 11:22pm
Hey Tears....what an honor to see your beautiful smile upon my page again.......thirlled that it holds a bit of mystery......I like that to in a write.......open to be interpreted but the reader......thank you for taking time share sweet thoughts with me.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Miracle
17th Apr 2016 2:54am
you follow
then next day u unfollow me
am i the thought of ur next
mystic story
but do not make it gory
then next day u unfollow me
am i the thought of ur next
mystic story
but do not make it gory
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Re: Re. Miracle
24th Apr 2016 11:24pm
Hey Again.....I do still follow you but been off here for a bit.....you know I only comment when it touches me.....I won't say words I don't think mean......you know that!! Purple smiles & hugs xo :)
Re. Miracle
21st Apr 2016 5:28am
Re: Re. Miracle
24th Apr 2016 11:26pm
Hi Whale.....always honored to see your smile......thank you....happy you felt this......appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)