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Silent Purple World
darkness is so lonely yet comforting
there's no one to judge me for who I am not
creeping shadows against a black wall
undetected while walking among dead souls
weeping and feeling their pain of dreaded choices
lured by a tempting devil who falsely luvs
desolated hearts feeling no difference
between wrong.....right.....luv or hate
no people telling me I'm not a good friend
place of solitude not hearing friends laughter
while I am cast out alone to confront the devils sigh
struggling no more with thoughts if I'm a worthy soul
sitting on a throne in my silent purple world
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
there's no one to judge me for who I am not
creeping shadows against a black wall
undetected while walking among dead souls
weeping and feeling their pain of dreaded choices
lured by a tempting devil who falsely luvs
desolated hearts feeling no difference
between wrong.....right.....luv or hate
no people telling me I'm not a good friend
place of solitude not hearing friends laughter
while I am cast out alone to confront the devils sigh
struggling no more with thoughts if I'm a worthy soul
sitting on a throne in my silent purple world
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 12th Apr 2016
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12th Apr 2016 4:31am
u needn't copy right
no damn one
with you purply can ever fight
right
let poetry ensue from you
like birds amass from a tree flew
ere the dawn
and the hunters first shot
his wood broke up
in bushes by a snake
got caught
no damn one
with you purply can ever fight
right
let poetry ensue from you
like birds amass from a tree flew
ere the dawn
and the hunters first shot
his wood broke up
in bushes by a snake
got caught
12th Apr 2016 10:30pm
Hey Again......I put an extra copyright on them cause I get them stolen all the time....find them on other poet sites......LOL!! Thank you for your response......appreciate you......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
13th Apr 2016 8:06pm
no..... people telling me I'm not..... a good friend
why this double negative
i wonder purply
why this double negative
i wonder purply
13th Apr 2016 8:11pm
Hey Again.......personal reference to a soul that got his facts wrong.......left my friendship cause I stood up for someone......xo :)
12th Apr 2016 10:48am
12th Apr 2016 10:32pm
Hey Kavik......you my friend shine in darkness or light.......the way you care about other souls shows your heart isn't as dark as you think it is......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Apr 2016 1:47pm
Though I can understand how one can feel like this, I also know U shouldn't... Becuz ur
super wonderful, super talented, n our (dup) super flower! :)
super wonderful, super talented, n our (dup) super flower! :)
12th Apr 2016 10:34pm
Awe Poet.......your words have brought a smile to my heart......you're a super sweetheart.......thank you so much for uplifting my emotions......purple luv & hugs xo :)
12th Apr 2016 2:55pm
Such dark thoughts you have given is today, flower.
Praise be the day when you come to understand
that what "they" say, or think, will not bother you in
the least. Live your life, because it is YOUR life.
Praise be the day when you come to understand
that what "they" say, or think, will not bother you in
the least. Live your life, because it is YOUR life.
12th Apr 2016 10:41pm
Welcome back SG...glad to see you again.......you're right in what you say.......it shouldn't bother me......I worry about decisions I've made that have effected lives as others made that effect mine......I now realize my heart has changed and not sure it's in a luving way or maybe I've just stopped wanting to be used......not to be treated as nothing but as somebody......it's no more than I ask from anyone else......sorry I got lost in emotions......thank you for your response......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
12th Apr 2016 2:58pm
I am torn, plucked and wilted G... this is a remarkably fine poem but your purple place is for happy luv, not dark loneliness or hate... {{{{hugs}}}}
JJ
JJ
12th Apr 2016 10:49pm
Hey JJ......thank you for your sentiment to me here.......perhaps karma is catching upto me as I made decisions that hurt others in time that has passed......just realized that's what's happened to me just not from the same souls....so I have to admit I deserve this pain within me......I just now learned this......so I've been served my wake up call......thank you for your words of support and warm hugs......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
13th Apr 2016 2:26am
Beautiful Sun Kissed... Good, bad or indifferent, all things happens for a reason...mistakes can be learned from and forgiven when ones heart is genuine as your friends here at DUP know yours to be...if there are some unable to see that then they are not worth a single tear you have shed in your darkened solitude. Much love to you my friend... Sending you hugs and love. With love - Sweet S xo :)
13th Apr 2016 8:33am
Hey Sweet S.......you're so very precious to me........thank you for your warm response to me.......I know you're right in your words......I feel very emotionally lost lately.......a fragile soul ready to crack and give in........not sure where I belong these days......I'm sure tears will make a path for me....appreciate you so very much for taking the time for me in your stressed world.......sending back luv & hugs your way.......xo :)
15th Apr 2016 1:47am
Darkness is just that, darkness! Comfort only rest in light. Stay in the light hun….anywhere else is just sad.
Beautiful expression of inner thoughts, Pprincess…. xo
Beautiful expression of inner thoughts, Pprincess…. xo
24th Apr 2016 10:39pm
Sexy Rain.......thank you for your insight on this......youre right there is rest in the light......darkness at times shows the truth that we must face.......appreciate you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Apr 2016 7:45pm
there is nothing wrong with darkness or dark thoughts as long as you have an internal torch that can shine a light when necessary :-)
excellent Ink :-)
excellent Ink :-)
24th Apr 2016 10:42pm
Hey David......always a pleasure to see your smile on my page.......I always have a light of passion within to guide me thru to the other side.......glad you liked this.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
