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My Words
My words show no mercy,
They rain down from blackened skies in the form of droplets of inked truths, an acidic rain storm burning below the skin.
My words aim to entrap you,
A slave to my hypnotic spell, to tear your being apart in hurricanes of rage.
My words are not held silenced by dark clouds, no end to them when peering down the barrel of a gun, my words strike the bullets taking back my life and situational control.
My words bury blades within poetic flesh, slashing, committing the ultimate crime, My words spread like an infection, implanting them in minds.
My words climb poetic walls to reach those that hide from the truth, making a mockery of perception or robotic influence.
My words build strength in the weak, the followers, independence rises to fight, to write out the chaotic fits that threaten floods to poetic shorelines lining the cities of their minds.
They rain down from blackened skies in the form of droplets of inked truths, an acidic rain storm burning below the skin.
My words aim to entrap you,
A slave to my hypnotic spell, to tear your being apart in hurricanes of rage.
My words are not held silenced by dark clouds, no end to them when peering down the barrel of a gun, my words strike the bullets taking back my life and situational control.
My words bury blades within poetic flesh, slashing, committing the ultimate crime, My words spread like an infection, implanting them in minds.
My words climb poetic walls to reach those that hide from the truth, making a mockery of perception or robotic influence.
My words build strength in the weak, the followers, independence rises to fight, to write out the chaotic fits that threaten floods to poetic shorelines lining the cities of their minds.
Published 11th Apr 2016
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11th Apr 2016 9:06pm
This is really a great write. I don't care for the form,
it's a bit too stretched out and could be compacted
for punch. Too many great lines to quote one.
it's a bit too stretched out and could be compacted
for punch. Too many great lines to quote one.
12th Apr 2016 5:05pm
12th Apr 2016 7:16pm
I'm thinking a lot has to do with posting on your phone...
May I have permission to play with this?
May I have permission to play with this?
12th Apr 2016 11:12pm
4th May 2016 3:45am
i didnt mind the form, i kinda understood it in a way, ive thought about writing like that myself though i see how shorter stanza would give it that punch. none the less very much liked, awesome lines, awesome write.
28th Dec 2020 00:04am
4th Jan 2021 12:37pm
