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Brew~
Early amber sunrise coupled with calm streams
of saccharinity across my tongue,
always seem to remind me of him.
He taste like hot vanilla-caramel latte.
Invigorating sweetness that goes down smoothly
scorching my throat,
yet I can still taste him...
long after the burn.
Secret moments found in cream droplets of now
reclining in the palms of my hands like sacred promises I commit to daily,
just to hold him close.
I thirst hard for him, like a lover in need-
Like a woman resting on the edge of triumph,
while swirling passion’s flag of surrender.
Bemused at my audacious lust that still weeps inside the sigh
on the end of our conversations.
Breathing in this sensual brew reminds me of an aroma…
I haven’t inhaled just yet.
His scent…..
his scent cradles the walls of my nirvana,
throbbing colors fused in silk persuasion, softening my ways…
making my days….. Brave.
Creating the belief that I can conquer anything as long as he was
my AM fix, my liquid hit that I could sip slowly
and become blissfully lit-
just by the taste of his…
brew.
Rain~
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Oh the sweet nectar you brew into an elixir of sensual verse turns me into an addict of passion I would inject into the vein leading straight to my heart. You are an amazing Poet dear Rain!!!
JJ
JJ
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22nd May 2016 4:50am
...the feeling is mutual, JJ! Your verses are beautiful love songs that I love listening to....
Thank you..
Thank you..
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Anonymous
9th Apr 2016 3:52pm
Rain, hot and luscious.. wonderfully done..
Dave
Dave
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22nd May 2016 4:52am
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22nd May 2016 4:53am
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9th Apr 2016 9:37pm
Ooohhh so that's what 'BREW' is!!??
Silly me, I always thought it was a cold beer
Guys want after a long day of work lmao
Anyway, this was definitely Hhhiootttt!!!
n super sexy As only you can do my dear!! :)
Silly me, I always thought it was a cold beer
Guys want after a long day of work lmao
Anyway, this was definitely Hhhiootttt!!!
n super sexy As only you can do my dear!! :)
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22nd May 2016 4:55am
lol... it's both. ....and I know how guys love their beer and... hot liquids. ;) Thanks Poe, for the ink support.
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9th Apr 2016 11:35pm
Loved this ...I think I shall call you the Lioness ...you have a royal strength....the power your weakness gives you is beautiful :)
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.....it's been a few brain cells dead since this poem was written and now I finally noticed your comment about where the *lioness* was conceived. ;) Totally blushing.... Thank you, T!
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2016 2:51am
Sonsista.... Oh how I just loved these lines right here... I feel them deeply...
"His scent…..
his scent cradles the walls of my nirvana,
throbbing colors fused in silk persuasion, softening my ways…
making my days….. Brave."
Pen respect as always my dear...
With love - Taryn xoxo
"His scent…..
his scent cradles the walls of my nirvana,
throbbing colors fused in silk persuasion, softening my ways…
making my days….. Brave."
Pen respect as always my dear...
With love - Taryn xoxo
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22nd May 2016 5:07am
hi lady T,
I thankya kindly hun,.... always a joy for my page to flirt with your presence. :)
Quill love~
I thankya kindly hun,.... always a joy for my page to flirt with your presence. :)
Quill love~
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Anonymous
10th Apr 2016 2:58am
Sexy Rain.......this spills sweet flavor all the way thru it.......a cup of this brew every morning wold be a delight......wonderful sexy sensual write.......laced with a bit of longing for his taste.......whew......catching my breath......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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22nd May 2016 5:10am
hello PPrincess, happy you were able to savor the flavor of my poetic-brew. Glad it went down hot, yet smooth. ;)
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10th Apr 2016 5:20am
MMmmm....MMmmm.....MMMmmmmm.....my senses slip into the sensuality....into the pure pleasure of this piece....
to sip from (his) lips the lust....the passion...drinking his darkest desires--to savor the flavor as a cup of delicious, decadent early morning brew......
Aaahhhh......the perfect 'wake-up' call....
Addicted to....and craving more ....of your sexy scribes, mo Chara!
to sip from (his) lips the lust....the passion...drinking his darkest desires--to savor the flavor as a cup of delicious, decadent early morning brew......
Aaahhhh......the perfect 'wake-up' call....
Addicted to....and craving more ....of your sexy scribes, mo Chara!
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22nd May 2016 5:13am
Dark E, what a pleasure to see you! :) Your penmanship has been missed. Looking forward to catching up.
As always, thank you for the wonderful ink nod. xo
As always, thank you for the wonderful ink nod. xo
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12th Apr 2016 2:27am
Every rich drop
Perfectly too hot
Tempered for strength
To last
Yet tenderly warm inside
A perfect brew
For morning
Or night
Always enchanting
Always breath taking
Perfectly too hot
Tempered for strength
To last
Yet tenderly warm inside
A perfect brew
For morning
Or night
Always enchanting
Always breath taking
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22nd May 2016 5:15am
"Always enchanting
Always breath taking"<----- kinda' like...you?! :) Miss ya!
Always breath taking"<----- kinda' like...you?! :) Miss ya!
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18th Apr 2016 5:36pm
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22nd May 2016 5:17am
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19th Apr 2016 6:07pm
raising my espresso cup to this one, rainy lady...
... what a feast, all the sense engaged, stimulated & with such incomparably sensual finesse
only you could pull this off
xo
... what a feast, all the sense engaged, stimulated & with such incomparably sensual finesse
only you could pull this off
xo
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22nd May 2016 5:20am
*clinks cappuccino cups together* Cheers to a delightfully sweet compliment, dancedoll! Thanks pretty woman...xo
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So enchanting... so blissful... Such imagery... Yes!! Yes!! I may have found my muse lol.... Such a breathtakingly beautiful read.... Reading your pieces takes me back to my old poetry site where the poets penned passionate, deep and inspirational pieces.... Love it...
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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2nd Jul 2016 4:01am
You've wowed me with your commentary, BSavvy. :)
Truly humbled that I've inspired you! Smiling big! Thank you so much and appreciate you taking her home with you....
Truly humbled that I've inspired you! Smiling big! Thank you so much and appreciate you taking her home with you....