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Seducing the Muse
My lover, my muse
Conceive unborn poetry with me
You inspire my heart to pump visions in rune
Thrusting my verse deeply in your aerie
Suck the words from my ink bleeding quill
While our paean strokes in climactic meter
To rise from my mouth in a doggerel yawp
The seeds of collaboration hatched in our nest
Will dance in harmonic rhyme with your soul and mine
Creating metrical art birthing stanzas to life
Conceive unborn poetry with me
You inspire my heart to pump visions in rune
Thrusting my verse deeply in your aerie
Suck the words from my ink bleeding quill
While our paean strokes in climactic meter
To rise from my mouth in a doggerel yawp
The seeds of collaboration hatched in our nest
Will dance in harmonic rhyme with your soul and mine
Creating metrical art birthing stanzas to life
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Re. Seducing the Muse
6th Apr 2016 2:58pm
certainly the best request to do a collaboration I have ever read :-)
strong sexual tones reflecting the creative processes writing poetry :-)
strong sexual tones reflecting the creative processes writing poetry :-)
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Re: Re. Seducing the Muse
6th Apr 2016 4:49pm
Thank you David. To be honest this poem is incomplete. I wrote it with intentions of sending it to another poet here that I like very much and want o do a collaboration with. After I wrote this, I was going to ask her to write a response line to each of my lines. But then I thought it might not work like that because I had already done that. So I decided to leave it the way it is and start fresh if she wants to collab with me. I am still considering the original idea if she wants to do it that way, and then perhaps she can write something that I can write responses to.
But this feels incomplete, so if she declines, perhaps I will write response lines in rhyme.
I'm glad you liked it. I am not the best judge of my own poetry.
JJ
But this feels incomplete, so if she declines, perhaps I will write response lines in rhyme.
I'm glad you liked it. I am not the best judge of my own poetry.
JJ
Re. Seducing the Muse
6th Apr 2016 5:41pm
Never read a more creative, appealing, and irresistible way to ask a girl out on a 'musing date'...lol..
Your seduction skills are flawless...
Your seduction skills are flawless...
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Re: Re. Seducing the Muse
6th Apr 2016 6:49pm
"Musing date" lol, I guess that's a thing now... HA! Thank you Tara! I'm such a flawless seducer... hahaha!
JJ
JJ
Re. Seducing the Muse
Haven't come across a better poetic request than this JJ! craftily put, I 'feel' it would be hard for anyone to decline..(it would surely be a poetic INJUSTICE)
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
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Re: Re. Seducing the Muse
7th Apr 2016 7:23pm
Re. Seducing the Muse
8th Apr 2016 11:00am
Hey JJ.....didn't realize I missed this one when I read the other......LOL!! I do apologize for missing such a great felt tribute......beautiful words my friend that I'm sure will be cherished by a very fortunate soul......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Seducing the Muse
8th Apr 2016 11:07am
Not to worry, it's not like this is a race to see who comments first. They say he who laughs last, laughs best. So she who comments late gets the longest masturbate! Lololololololol!!!
JJ
JJ
Re. Seducing the Muse
9th Apr 2016 2:19am
Check out the follow up to this poem, "the Muse and the Mate" posted right after this one.
JJ
JJ
Re. Seducing the Muse
Re: Re. Seducing the Muse
9th Apr 2016 9:32pm