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I desire you like the sand crave footprints….
I’m in love with ginger scent fantasies of you
flowered in an amaretto dream,
where I can observe you with a faint gaze
concentrating on my curves.
Sweet manna slipping delicately from a blushed Zion
renewed through the ordainment of your
plummeting in passively.
Epiphany embed in a carnal slavery
that baptized your syllables down my throat.
Salacious mind starving for untamed intimacy,
while my ripe nest yearn...every…single...inch...of you.
I desire you like the sand crave footprints to find its purpose…
Passion’s heat pushes through my flesh
when you secure a proven promise between my lips
with indoctrinated seeds.
The silk panels of my jealous womb quivers and my flesh
swelter through corrupted skin like a fire with no chance
of being extinguished.
Speaking your name injects lust in my veins
and it becomes clear the hold you have on me….
leaving me vulnerable to your appeal
the Will that manipulates me to rise to crescendo-
each time you touch me.....
even, at a distance.
Rain~
Published 6th Apr 2016
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6th Apr 2016 6:51am
9th Apr 2016 4:49am
Anonymous
6th Apr 2016 8:20am
sweltering...
images of foggy windows
and outstretched hand prints
glaze across the mental
...
this reeks of infatuated
infernal passion
..
ooooweeee..
images of foggy windows
and outstretched hand prints
glaze across the mental
...
this reeks of infatuated
infernal passion
..
ooooweeee..
9th Apr 2016 4:52am
"sweltering...
images of foggy windows
and outstretched hand prints
glaze across the mental" <-- I likessss that! :) Thanks Naajir!
images of foggy windows
and outstretched hand prints
glaze across the mental" <-- I likessss that! :) Thanks Naajir!
6th Apr 2016 9:33am
this is so hot i had to go out & jump in the snow....yes we have snow here i know crazy right.....when youwant your erotica is amazing...i feel like i am dribbling words so i will stop now...:D
...lol... thank you T! It wasn't suppose to be that hot, but I'm delighted it warmed you up a bit. Your comments do inspire though... ;)
6th Apr 2016 10:04am
This is the kind of poem that makes me wish I could find your inner twin and your clone to make a complete copy of you all for my own. Every line is seductively lovely and creatively inspiring... your mind, heart and soul are a triangle that forms the essence of paradise...
JJ
JJ
I just don't know what to say to your beautiful and flattering commentary anymore, JJ!
*At times our own light goes out and is rekindled by the spark from another person. Each of us have cause to think with deep gratitude of those who have lit the flame within us.* Albert S.
You add to my light jj! :) Thank you, and I'm so happy you decided to keep her for a little while! xo
*At times our own light goes out and is rekindled by the spark from another person. Each of us have cause to think with deep gratitude of those who have lit the flame within us.* Albert S.
You add to my light jj! :) Thank you, and I'm so happy you decided to keep her for a little while! xo
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
6th Apr 2016 1:01pm
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.....this was such a beautiful (and sensual, I might add) comment. Adore it todski! Thanks luv....
"pressed in the wet sand
the afterimage of that yearning
embedded
there a perfect outline" <--- smiling.
"pressed in the wet sand
the afterimage of that yearning
embedded
there a perfect outline" <--- smiling.
6th Apr 2016 2:13pm
Wow!! *gulp* mmmmm just took
a big drink of heated sensual
perfection n I must admit it seared
my hungry soul lol... Exceptional
spill R!! :)
a big drink of heated sensual
perfection n I must admit it seared
my hungry soul lol... Exceptional
spill R!! :)
9th Apr 2016 1:57pm
"a big drink of heated sensual
perfection n I must admit it seared
my hungry soul"<-- now that makes me *gulp* ;) Thank you hun and I appreciate you keeping her....
perfection n I must admit it seared
my hungry soul"<-- now that makes me *gulp* ;) Thank you hun and I appreciate you keeping her....
6th Apr 2016 6:04pm
Man! Oh man. Oh man! You make me feel what I'm reading and you voice so well things I've felt before. Thank You. And thank you again
9th Apr 2016 1:59pm
hey 3Plus, overjoyed you could feel my words,.... a poet's ultimate goal. :) Thank you so much....
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9th Apr 2016 2:00pm
Anonymous
7th Apr 2016 00:28am
Sonsista, yes change can be good but so glad to see these type of delicacies don't... Ahhh to float where you do my friend would be a most lovely place to be caged in...
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
9th Apr 2016 2:03pm
Thank you so much for the lovely comment and understanding! Appreciate the lyrical love, Sonsista! xo
7th Apr 2016 9:35pm
every word is so captivating and beautifully written... awesome talent with the ink Tara... welcome to DU Poetry :D
9th Apr 2016 2:05pm
aww, thanks luv, pleased that you think so!
*a new page, not a new member...* xo
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/rain1courtel/
*a new page, not a new member...* xo
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/rain1courtel/
Anonymous
9th Apr 2016 3:50pm
Rain, simply brilliant.. really love your imagery..
Dave
Dave
27th Apr 2016 10:27pm
Dave, this is such a lovely compliment coming from you, thank you! :) Ecstatic you decided to take her home....xo
Anonymous
10th Apr 2016 3:53am
Wowzers Sexy Rain.......now this what I call a great good night write.......super sexy lines all the way thru......luving this.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
27th Apr 2016 10:29pm
..you're too kind sweetheart, thank you lovely lady. Always happy to see your purple haze.....xoxo
30th May 2016 4:47pm
"......the Will that manipulates me to rise to crescendo-
each time you touch me.....
even, at a distance. "
Can I simply touch you again? Divinely created. Words that feel..........love it
each time you touch me.....
even, at a distance. "
Can I simply touch you again? Divinely created. Words that feel..........love it
2nd Jun 2016 7:05am
"Can I simply touch you again?" <--- ????? :)
Thank you for the love Archie and I appreciate you kidnapping her wayyyy back when. xo
Thank you for the love Archie and I appreciate you kidnapping her wayyyy back when. xo
