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Reckoning
A retrograde of volition has lead me into uncharted territory, though I presume that I'm near the corner of karma and consequences
Not really lonely but throughly alone
Not really lost either, because that would imply that there was somewhere I belonged in the first place
So I suppose I'm just here
Sorting out this numbness paralyzing every aspect of my being
Bear with me
I'm working through some things
Not really lonely but throughly alone
Not really lost either, because that would imply that there was somewhere I belonged in the first place
So I suppose I'm just here
Sorting out this numbness paralyzing every aspect of my being
Bear with me
I'm working through some things
Published 5th Apr 2016
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5th Apr 2016 7:34am
It has a personal tone to it and I like that, but I would encourage you to go deeper, tell us more. Just when the story begins to get interesting, it is over. Namaste. :)
5th Apr 2016 11:47pm
Thanks, and there will be more, in time. Like I said, I'm working through some things...
Anonymous
5th Apr 2016 8:09am
"Not really lost either,
because that would imply
that there was somewhere
I belonged in the first place "
deep..and profound
hopefully the numbness fades
so you can pull up the shade
and let in the SUN..
heavy vibe without question
because that would imply
that there was somewhere
I belonged in the first place "
deep..and profound
hopefully the numbness fades
so you can pull up the shade
and let in the SUN..
heavy vibe without question
5th Apr 2016 11:48pm
6th Apr 2016 4:04am
I feel this deeply B_E! The state of lingering in your own haze, needing some time to see beyond the blur.
*Take all the time you need* Sending positive energy your way.....xo
*Take all the time you need* Sending positive energy your way.....xo
6th Apr 2016 6:35am
Anonymous
7th Apr 2016 00:12am
I echo my lovely Sonsista above... Deep write and I also LOVED the lines Naaj pointed out. Take the time you need... We will be here anxiously waiting for you...
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
9th Apr 2016 4:35am
Anonymous
10th Apr 2016 2:55am
Thank YOU for such a lovely comment returned back to me!
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
