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A Star Or A Comet
Some things happen
why, we'll never know
you had a loving family
and a stable, decent home
young , attractive
with many friends who'd call
outwardly happy
you'd smile and say hello
whatever happened
I guess we'll never know.
Aged only eighteen
you decided it's time to leave
I find it hard to believe
that we won't see you anymore .
I believe now
that you're a star
you were anyway
but now you really are
your deciisions on that day
are cemented , mental scars
but you had your reasons
we all respect that
though it's hard.
I think a bigger calling
needed you somewhere
and we'll all understand this
one day when we get there
maybe too good for this planet
where people live life scared
you're a star or a comet
with extra bright white flare
goodnight for now sweetheart
goodbye , ride high , take care .
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