Heri (Latin)

Hello, Sena. I'd work on your grammar (writing your poems in Microsoft Word helps me with this), then you can avoid little mistakes like a comma before the question mark in "Why,?" and "cant" as opposed to "can't". If you want to convey something profound and meaningful to your readers, I'd suggest also trying to convey good solid images. For instance, "the sun is whispering to me from its lofty kingdom in the clouds while I am here, standing in the forest". Just something to help the reader latch onto a picture or a landscape so your poem sticks in their mind more.

You, I thank you very much,
there's two point I want to clarify and it is,
English is my second language.
the original version, of my poems,
are written in another way.
I really appreciate your critics is a good one.
actually you are the first, well , like the second person that worries about that. thanks.
Sena