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Bathtub Noir
Bathtub Noir
Sunk in bathtub noir
Black walls circle me like hawks
My naked body to be the feast
For Gothic sisters in coal gowns
They slip their Coven cotton off
Baring leather strap bodices
Having melted in the waters of the bath
They lead me like a pony toward the bedroom
I gaze upon their upturned derrieres
as they fondle an art piece
Silver skin in steel grey light
A voice from beyond the grave
Summons me
Shame faced I dress and face the music
The girls flutter out the door
Like crows of appetite
Grandma glares like a mad schoolmarm
My apologies tumble like wings in a storm
Sunk in bathtub noir
Black walls circle me like hawks
My naked body to be the feast
For Gothic sisters in coal gowns
They slip their Coven cotton off
Baring leather strap bodices
Having melted in the waters of the bath
They lead me like a pony toward the bedroom
I gaze upon their upturned derrieres
as they fondle an art piece
Silver skin in steel grey light
A voice from beyond the grave
Summons me
Shame faced I dress and face the music
The girls flutter out the door
Like crows of appetite
Grandma glares like a mad schoolmarm
My apologies tumble like wings in a storm
Published 4th Apr 2016
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4th Apr 2016 1:30am
I'm not sure WTF is going on .... but it's erotic as hell.
<They slip their Coven cotton off>
This line gives me goosebumps.
<They slip their Coven cotton off>
This line gives me goosebumps.
4th Apr 2016 1:42am
Thanks so much man. It is a weird dream I had last night. I was in this tub about to have a threesome with these two Goth girls. Then my grandma, who is deceased, appears mad as hell at me for bringing these girls into her house for a tryst. Thanks for reading brother.
John
John
4th Apr 2016 1:48am
I understand Johnny's comment...i had a clue about your Grama being your ghost of conscience...
Its really dark erotica...i love it!!
The girls flutter out the door
Like crows of appetite
Like crows of appetite...oh wonderful!!
A stunner my wicked boy..
I love you and your wicked mind..l
Love you like worship
Jen
Its really dark erotica...i love it!!
The girls flutter out the door
Like crows of appetite
Like crows of appetite...oh wonderful!!
A stunner my wicked boy..
I love you and your wicked mind..l
Love you like worship
Jen
Thank you Jen. This was a very lucid dream. I remember also the girls were gazing at and touching a strange art piece on the wall while I admired them from behind. LOL Also Grandma had a short boycut. Thank you love. Glad you enjoyed my hallucination. LOL
Love you like the Goddess,
John
Love you like the Goddess,
John
4th Apr 2016 2:08am
Oh i am sure your dream mind had them turn around to get a glimpse of the darlings apple derriers...lol...plump ones dimpled ones..upside down valentine ones...and their seductive shake...my Grampa used to sing a song..Shes got freckles on her butt..shes purty! Lol...he would have been a man after ypur heart.
I will take care of your plump juicy posterior soon and with swift stinging swat...mmm...i love when you are naughty...it is so much fun punishing you.
I love you...you are my home...i.live in the shelter of our love. No one has ever held a candle to you. You are the most wonderful man I have ever known. You taught me what real love is. I am Zen in you.
I will take care of your plump juicy posterior soon and with swift stinging swat...mmm...i love when you are naughty...it is so much fun punishing you.
I love you...you are my home...i.live in the shelter of our love. No one has ever held a candle to you. You are the most wonderful man I have ever known. You taught me what real love is. I am Zen in you.
4th Apr 2016 2:14am
We are in a Zendo of sensual Buddhism. We are the Gnostic Buddhist eschewing Spartan monasticism in favor of the more erotic delights. I'll sit very still while you strip me of my clothing. Soon we'll do our own freestyle Zen with sensuality at the forefront. Oh what revolutionaries we are. Aesthetic reactionaries. Gotta love our personal Buddha heaven of the heart and body. ;-)
I'm such a heretic LOL
Love ya,
John
I'm such a heretic LOL
Love ya,
John
"Young man, you get your ass out that tub and get rid of those, those,...just get rid of them! Now!!!"
( as your cock shrinked from her presence) ;) Much enjoyed!
( as your cock shrinked from her presence) ;) Much enjoyed!
4th Apr 2016 2:09am
RainC_Tara, your comment made my night. cock shrinked from her presence. LMAO!!!! You put a huge smile on my face. Gracias mi amiga. ;-)
