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Deceptive Fate
how you walk thru my soul
a silent voice deep within me
how I secretly felt you
as I watch your smile from afar
feeling you still after all this time
spent so many nights in tears
when you acted like I wasn't alive
as I watch your soul unfold
sneaking unknown peeks
knowing you'd never luv me true
silent thru my heart you will be
as I watch my life without you
this time I chose our deceptive fate
turned my passion away from you
when true fully I still need your prescence
as I cry once again over luving you
(Dedicated to a beautiful and sacred Lady.....luv ya!!)
(Thank you for sharing tears with me)
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
a silent voice deep within me
how I secretly felt you
as I watch your smile from afar
feeling you still after all this time
spent so many nights in tears
when you acted like I wasn't alive
as I watch your soul unfold
sneaking unknown peeks
knowing you'd never luv me true
silent thru my heart you will be
as I watch my life without you
this time I chose our deceptive fate
turned my passion away from you
when true fully I still need your prescence
as I cry once again over luving you
(Dedicated to a beautiful and sacred Lady.....luv ya!!)
(Thank you for sharing tears with me)
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 31st Mar 2016
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Anonymous
31st Mar 2016 2:25am
Beautiful.
31st Mar 2016 2:37am
Welcome to DU Aaron!! Thank you for your taking time to stop by my page.......appreciate the smile......glad you liked this......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
31st Mar 2016 8:46am
It seems some luvs are never meant to be.. how bittersweet to turn away from the purple light shining in the heart of another...
{{{{Hugs}}}}
JJ
{{{{Hugs}}}}
JJ
31st Mar 2016 7:45pm
Hey JJ......you're right or some you just have to turn away from to not hurt so much.......so maybe the other will appreciate what they had at one time.......I couldn't help write this one for her......as the tears we shared were mine of the part and hers of present state......thank you for the "hugs"......sending them back to you with luv xo :)
31st Mar 2016 11:49am
31st Mar 2016 7:46pm
31st Mar 2016 3:32pm
Ahhh . . . Such heartfelt emotion flower, to someone who is
gone, but n'er forgotten. Someone, by the tone and words
of this beautiful poem will never ever be forgotten. She is
in your heart and soul, and if it is at all possible she knows
it and reads the words of this poem as do we . . .
gone, but n'er forgotten. Someone, by the tone and words
of this beautiful poem will never ever be forgotten. She is
in your heart and soul, and if it is at all possible she knows
it and reads the words of this poem as do we . . .
31st Mar 2016 7:48pm
Hi SG.....she has read it......I sent it to her by email.....she luvs it......it is about a person in each of our lives that will never be forgotten......in her heart and mine.......thank you for your sensitive voice here......always enjoy your smile upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
31st Mar 2016 7:05pm
my rating of readers
has fallen from 400 to 200
and now three erotica's
to have been read by 46 only
will i ever be able to cummmmm again
do tell me
or else I shall revert
to those who want my cum
from me
tell me flowery I am now becoming
distastefully
has fallen from 400 to 200
and now three erotica's
to have been read by 46 only
will i ever be able to cummmmm again
do tell me
or else I shall revert
to those who want my cum
from me
tell me flowery I am now becoming
distastefully
31st Mar 2016 7:50pm
Again.......you're not becoming distasteful......give people a chance to read you.....they will.....experiment with the pen......go back and forth.......you will see your true followers will read whatever you post.......I promise!! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
31st Mar 2016 11:27pm
Still a great read the second time around, well done Beautiful Flower. Love, respect, and peace.
1st Apr 2016 00:53am
Awe D.......you making me blush......I'm so glad you enjoyed this once again......thank you for the honor of seeing your smile upon my page........purple smiles & hugs to you xo :)
2nd Apr 2016 00:35am
Oh flower, this is lovely, very sad, but lovely nevertheless. Cry once more for what could have been, then don't drop a single tear again. xo
....you know how I love elegance in art and that image is to die for. Mesmerized by her....
....you know how I love elegance in art and that image is to die for. Mesmerized by her....
4th Apr 2016 3:37am
Thank you Sexy Rain......your words and smile upon this one means a lot.......you know where this came from......hearing her words and sharing her tears I just couldn't hold this one in......it took me back in time.......hopefully we both helped each other thru the tears.......glad you like this stunning pic......appreciate you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Apr 2016 3:31pm
Love is the most fickle of emotions that can never be fully trusted. I tend to face it with low expectation so that when it all goes wrong I don't feel so bad as it reaches the lowness of my previous expectations.
sad and beautifully written poem really made me think today :-)
sad and beautifully written poem really made me think today :-)
4th Apr 2016 3:48am
Hey David......your comment had made me think as well......I thank you for sharing such thoughts with me......I must say though......I'm great ful for the experiences in life I've gone thru...good or bad......cause they've made me more thankful for the path they led me to now.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Apr 2016 5:28pm
when one s grateful
the other must feel so
you needn't have to express so
I just saw my blankness on ur friends list
did you not place it mistakenly!!!!
thanks any way purply
the other must feel so
you needn't have to express so
I just saw my blankness on ur friends list
did you not place it mistakenly!!!!
thanks any way purply
6th Apr 2016 00:38am
Hi Again......not sure what you mean by this......please tell me......:)
"I just saw my blankness on ur friends list
did you not place it mistakenly!!!!
thanks any way purply"
"I just saw my blankness on ur friends list
did you not place it mistakenly!!!!
thanks any way purply"
