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Love-Poetry
It comes in many forms
In brown eyed boys
And lips that taste like love
In teasing shadows
With shifting shapes
And the way she looks at you
It breaks and drips
Like veins made of glass
And grows like blades of grass
In brown eyed boys
And lips that taste like love
In teasing shadows
With shifting shapes
And the way she looks at you
It breaks and drips
Like veins made of glass
And grows like blades of grass
Published 30th Mar 2016
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30th Mar 2016 4:39am
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30th Mar 2016 6:18am
Looks at it from point of view of women and men, a good sum up of what goes on. Last line may well reflect the Beatles song line 'Love is all around'.
30th Mar 2016 1:52pm
30th Mar 2016 11:58am
it's mysterious & reckless & we never get enough of it.
great piece, Tommie...
great piece, Tommie...
30th Mar 2016 1:54pm
Ahhh . . . sensual and informative, plus "And the way she looks at you ."
Yep, that look. That smile. That gait. It says volumes, but instead of
words she reveals her intimate feelings through her physical whims!
Yep, that look. That smile. That gait. It says volumes, but instead of
words she reveals her intimate feelings through her physical whims!
30th Mar 2016 3:58pm
Wonderful comment standingmyground.
I believe in "the look", a person can show so much from one look. Thanks for reading me 😊
I believe in "the look", a person can show so much from one look. Thanks for reading me 😊
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14th Apr 2016 2:31pm
Few words yet deep and at the same time expressively creative. I admire your works Short and brief yet delightfully beautiful.
Paul.
Paul.
