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When I Look Through Your Eyes,Makes Me Feel Free
Me In You, Have So Much In Comment.
We Hurt, And Have Truth Issues.
I Miss You When You Not Around,
When Laying By Each Other.
Hoping You'll Give Me A Change, Not Like The Females You Had.
Don't Push Me Away, Give Me A Chance.
I'm Trying To Show You I Mean Every Word
We Both Have Hurt Issue, Lets Leave Them Be Hide.
You My Light,
My Day,And Shinny Armor.
Just Let Me In, Don't Be Feared I Feel Your Pain Of Being Hurt.
Ill Always And Will, Love You With in.
Close Your Eyes And, Take It In.
I Know It's Scary, But Just Try.
Ill Be Beside You For Intercity.
Love You, My Baby
We Hurt, And Have Truth Issues.
I Miss You When You Not Around,
When Laying By Each Other.
Hoping You'll Give Me A Change, Not Like The Females You Had.
Don't Push Me Away, Give Me A Chance.
I'm Trying To Show You I Mean Every Word
We Both Have Hurt Issue, Lets Leave Them Be Hide.
You My Light,
My Day,And Shinny Armor.
Just Let Me In, Don't Be Feared I Feel Your Pain Of Being Hurt.
Ill Always And Will, Love You With in.
Close Your Eyes And, Take It In.
I Know It's Scary, But Just Try.
Ill Be Beside You For Intercity.
Love You, My Baby
Published 29th Mar 2016
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30th Mar 2016 1:22am
There's a number of misspellings
BUT the sentiment is very clearly expressed n it's very very sweet :)
BUT the sentiment is very clearly expressed n it's very very sweet :)
30th Mar 2016 1:33am
30th Mar 2016 9:38pm
Echo poetikmind. Is "Intercity" intended to read "eternity" - the word reminds me of the Intercity rail services our British Rail used to advertise on tv ("Intercity for you...").
