Seducing Life

i don't know what kinda crack everyone's been smoking this weekend but the poetry here is feckin' next level
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holy fuck
fuck & holy
rainy lady, could we turn this into a prayer {?} something for the 3am bathroom floor revelations that are only seen through the facets of empty decanters...
... something to give a little hope
gawddamn loved this
xo

Wow Rain, this is intense! I don't remember reading this 3 years ago, but I must have. I wonder what I said of it then. But now I think you are offering yourself up as a sacrifice. The imagery blows me away as I'm sure it did then. You're words are always a storm to behold and this is a hurricane of pain with an edge of sensuality that leave me longing for your tsunami to wash me away...!
JJ

I feel the the intense agony of bereavement in this ink. It's like a  scream of great pain heard only internally, known in full only to the sufferer yet we, the humbled reader of this work, get a strong sense of it.
Beautifully, tragically  expressed.

welcome to the fight club...question everything...push beyond every boundary ...die & be reborn in the fires of passions embrace....letters are not even good enough for your poetry...i sense it in smells & colors...vibrations & echos of emotions that bleed into me & stain my soul.....if you could not tell...i freaken loved this to the extreme...bows to you & turns out the light...ladies & gentlemen the show is now over

Sounds like a lot of pain here. Just glad that I here a lot of frustration too. That usually means a person's had enough and is about to push back, hard. Always waiting for your next piece

This is an amazingly astute write coming from a place
of depth not many people are willing to face in a lifetime.

I need to slowly sip on scorching infidelity    
blistering my throat with abandoned trust,  
so forgiveness can be tested.  

It is the very contrast of the negative which enables
us to recognize and appreciate the positive. It's the very
experience of who or what we don't want to become
that reveals who or what we desire to become.

Beautiful write, Rain.

WOW ... this is a beautiful, powerful ink Rain ... all I can think to say is Thank You ... ox

Rain..
you master any realm you choose
to journey..
holding readers hostage
through cerebral bondage
until your words are engraved
into the psyche ...
your calligraphy crucifies,lady..
..yes it does..

this piece is profound and brilliant Rain... no other writes like this... keep flowing that inferno :)

jeez Rain, this is probaly the most fierce thing i have ever read, a yearning of life, the desire, an epiphanic explosion, a monsoon of magma, on a canvass of your exquisite poetry, like how a little reason entered at the end so as not to fall over the edge, if that's what you meant (im still new at this so excuse my ignorance), but the point was made, thank you posting this again, for those of us who did not have the privilege to partake in it the first time...

That level of passion you display within only exists in very few
that I know of, needless to say it's EASY for me to relate to this becuz
I'm the MALE version of whom u speak of... Fucking Aaaammmmaaazzziinnggg!!!

Miss Rain, Miss Rain, damn woman!  And I'll leave it at that. ~Devlin.

Sexy Rain!! Do I hear Angels grunting and satan chanting......yes I think I do......what a kick ass write......do all this stuff.....just do it.....let every part of you go wild......intriguing lines thru out this amazing write.......enjoyed your power of words and emotions......whew......my heart is pounding......purple luv & hugs xo :)

'down & dirty' don't hardly describe the blowtorch passion of this.
you leave quivering ashes in your wake...

holy hell this is intense... perfect for the mindset I've been in lately. fuck conformity just make memories... live life to the fullest... all that good stuff. loved the read

Rain1courtel, luv ~ :-*

This is so excruciatingly exquisite I've lost the words to adequately convey to you all the many varied ways tis a work of magnificent artistry and immense meaning.

I will say this, though, excruciatingly exquisite is the exact terminology for it to my mind for as gloriously beautiful as it is, tis also horrendously painful: the balance, as in life, as it's meant to be, ne c'est pas?

You outdo yourself here, ma chérie. You really, really do. You are quite a force with which to be reckoned, as a hurricane... :-*

Thank you all so much for the wonderful, and awesome commentary! I would do my usual individual responses, but I'm moving next door... xoxo  ;)