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Soft and Lush
Pieces of my dream
Our life together
Spring upon us
Hand and hand by the meadow
Translucent and dreamy
Soft kisses
Lovely
Our life together
Spring upon us
Hand and hand by the meadow
Translucent and dreamy
Soft kisses
Lovely
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- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
28th Mar 2016 6:38am
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Re: Re. Soft and Lush
28th Mar 2016 12:17pm
Thx
These are better than the hardcore I believe .....
What do you think ?
xx
These are better than the hardcore I believe .....
What do you think ?
xx
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
28th Mar 2016 11:38pm
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28th Mar 2016 11:59pm
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28th Mar 2016 3:26pm
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28th Mar 2016 3:40pm
Re. Soft and Lush
28th Mar 2016 6:07pm
Get back to painting, brother! While you write, of course. Love these tidbits of daydreams. They're soft, horizonal haze at daybreak.
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28th Mar 2016 7:28pm
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28th Mar 2016 9:35pm
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28th Mar 2016 10:18pm
I really enjoyed this but it left me waiting for a punchline of some sorts - maybe its just me :-)
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28th Mar 2016 10:23pm
You're right, I wanted to add a few more lines but couldn't get there so I dumped out early. Maybe some will be added another time ....