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Love Poem
All these stumbling blocks we know
hang from the rusted chain of love
it binds us up and tortures our soul
like a flash of chain lightning
hiding in the storm
hang from the rusted chain of love
it binds us up and tortures our soul
like a flash of chain lightning
hiding in the storm
Published 27th Mar 2016
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27th Mar 2016 10:07pm
27th Mar 2016 11:45pm
Wow, a very 'grey' vision of what is considered a ultimate attainment for many... Love ur poetic approach though :)
29th Mar 2016 12:10pm
....and boy oh boy is it is easy to wrap that love chain several times around your neck...and pull.....ouch! Great poetic ditty....ONE
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- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
30th Mar 2016 1:55am
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