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starmen
from the precipice
dawn scales the serated ledge
an enlightened view
ancient to modern
back and forth we timely step
conventions unbound
worlds to discover
heiroglyphs and stones bequeath
an entombed portal
burning juniper
mountain sagebrush anointing
holy procession
from surrounding hours
granite space magnetizes
the dead at sunrise
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Published 27th Mar 2016
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27th Mar 2016 1:27pm
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27th Mar 2016 5:30pm
Thank you, Wally. Happiest of Easter's to you and your family. May peace and love rule.
27th Mar 2016 11:05pm
to be honest, I rarely see
the dawn, unless I'm about
to go to bed..:)
and yet you generally write
in such a way that lets me
see things anyway...
the dawn, unless I'm about
to go to bed..:)
and yet you generally write
in such a way that lets me
see things anyway...
28th Mar 2016 00:21am
There's actually a quote that says something about dawn not being attractive unless you're already up! Thanks, Paul. Hope your Easter was fabulous.
28th Mar 2016 3:54am
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29th Mar 2016 4:24am
"From the precipice, dawn scales the serrated edge." The meter and imagery here is magnificent Aha. Thank you
29th Mar 2016 7:27am
29th Mar 2016 8:00am
Ahavati, you have an amazing way with words! Your choice of wording is impeccable!
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"worlds to discover
heiroglyphs and stones bequeath
an entombed portal"<--- Stunning! Pen Praise~
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"worlds to discover
heiroglyphs and stones bequeath
an entombed portal"<--- Stunning! Pen Praise~
12th Jul 2016 8:29am
