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Virgin Sacrifice (2 tanka)
Virgin Sacrifice (tanka)
Reclined catlike
Dunes loom in gentle humps
Against starfields
In deep desert night
Her breasts swell with moon
Supple flesh melts
Our bodies merge
in restless desire
tropic currents flow
through one ocean of need
Reclined catlike
Dunes loom in gentle humps
Against starfields
In deep desert night
Her breasts swell with moon
Supple flesh melts
Our bodies merge
in restless desire
tropic currents flow
through one ocean of need
Published 27th Mar 2016
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Oh my gosh i just melted. I love this so much John...so much. This incredibly exotic and sexy...i have never written tanka poetry...this makes me want to try....🌷
I love you like the moon needs the sun to shine...
Jen
I love you like the moon needs the sun to shine...
Jen
27th Mar 2016 3:05am
Jen thank you my love. I often try to say more with less. I have a book of this kind of stuff which I retired. Maybe time to bring it out again.
Love to you my sweet sweetheart of the midnight,
John
Love to you my sweet sweetheart of the midnight,
John
