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Heaven In My Arms
as we walk hand in hand thru the field
I look up at the sky and wonder
how near are we to heaven
see an eagle soaring with majestic presence
mountains covered with snow
and wonder are they touching heaven
green trees and grass blowing with the silent wind
hear the birds wondrously singing
watch a pair of swans crossing the pond
with their grace and beauty
fish jumping and turtles popping their heads
in and out of the water
cows and horses grazing in the fields
I watch God's creation all around me
you stop and turn to me
tightly hug me and just look at me
I suddenly realize God's greatest creation is in my arms
heaven isn't so far away after all
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
I look up at the sky and wonder
how near are we to heaven
see an eagle soaring with majestic presence
mountains covered with snow
and wonder are they touching heaven
green trees and grass blowing with the silent wind
hear the birds wondrously singing
watch a pair of swans crossing the pond
with their grace and beauty
fish jumping and turtles popping their heads
in and out of the water
cows and horses grazing in the fields
I watch God's creation all around me
you stop and turn to me
tightly hug me and just look at me
I suddenly realize God's greatest creation is in my arms
heaven isn't so far away after all
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Heaven In My Arms
26th Mar 2016 2:42am
an excellent descriptive piece, I could actually see it all :-)
great Ink :-)
great Ink :-)
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Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
28th Mar 2016 5:41pm
HI David......thank you for bringing your imagination and smile upon my page......it was beautiful to imagine.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Heaven In My Arms
26th Mar 2016 10:50am
The imagery of nature surrounding you as you discover love in the eyes of another echoes the moment of Adam and Eve's first sighting each other in the garden... quite beautiful and stirring in the heart!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
28th Mar 2016 5:50pm
Hi JJ.......what an awesome comment.......I often wonder how it would have been between them.......how beautiful our world be today......thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Heaven In My Arms
26th Mar 2016 2:18pm
The beautiful imagery n that pic.
made the serenity of this pure magic. :)
made the serenity of this pure magic. :)
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Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
Awe Poet........thank you for a touching words you leave me.......the pic gave me a special peaceful feeling when I found it.......glad you enjoyed......honored by the RL add on......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Heaven In My Arms
26th Mar 2016 2:54pm
You have written one of the best poem of love I have ever read, flower. My, my.
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Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
28th Mar 2016 6:00pm
Awe SG.......you've made my heart smile my friend.......I'm deeply moved.......thank you for your gracious words to me........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Heaven In My Arms
26th Mar 2016 7:27pm
This shows how much of an angel you are Flower. I don't think anyone around catches natural elements with the wonder that you do. The spirituality to this is also amazing, and deeply romantic. Very fine work!
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Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
28th Mar 2016 6:08pm
Crow my sweet friend......it's always an honor to have your smile upon my page.......I appreciate how you feel my writes.......this was spiritual for me.......im humbled by your graceful words........thank you......purple ouv & hugs xo :)
Re. Heaven In My Arms
26th Mar 2016 9:39pm
Romantic, I warm to the lines:
you stop and turn to me
tightly hug me and just look at me
I suddenly realize God's greatest creation is in my arms
heaven isn't so far away after all
Agree with Poetryman's Adam and Eve comment.
you stop and turn to me
tightly hug me and just look at me
I suddenly realize God's greatest creation is in my arms
heaven isn't so far away after all
Agree with Poetryman's Adam and Eve comment.
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Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
28th Mar 2016 6:13pm
Hi Solomon.......so glad this warmed you in some way......it was an awesome feeling writing it........how neat it would been to have lived in such a beautiful place all the time......appreciate you sharing thoughts with me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Heaven In My Arms
26th Mar 2016 11:16pm
So serene, flower, and gentle. Thank you for sharing all of these wonders with us.
Jade🌷
Jade🌷
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Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
28th Mar 2016 6:14pm
Hi Jade......thank you for the kind visit upon my page and taking time to smile upon my words.......I'm glad you enjoyed this and it made you feel serene.....it did me too.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
28th Mar 2016 6:18pm
Sweet S......always a pleasure and smile to my heart to see your luv upon my page......hope I always have the ability to ink what my heart allows me to feel and my soul to see.......bowing to the honor of your luving words.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
28th Mar 2016 6:20pm
Hi Again......thank you for the kind visit......glad you thought it "nice"......always thrilled to see your smile......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
29th Mar 2016 3:04am
on this I composed a soft poem I think
couldn't post it
lost the battle of the
Kings or was it Rings
couldn't post it
lost the battle of the
Kings or was it Rings
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Re. Heaven In My Arms
29th Mar 2016 7:50am
“I watch God's creation all around me
you stop and turn to me
tightly hug me and just look at me
I suddenly realize God's greatest creation is in my arms
heaven isn't so far away after all”<---- I was like, “awww”. So soft and tender! A beautiful majestic piece, flower! Love it cupcake.
you stop and turn to me
tightly hug me and just look at me
I suddenly realize God's greatest creation is in my arms
heaven isn't so far away after all”<---- I was like, “awww”. So soft and tender! A beautiful majestic piece, flower! Love it cupcake.
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Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
30th Mar 2016 1:14am
Hey Sexy Rain.......brilliant to see you my friend.......I'm so thrilled you caught his one......it's one of my favs I think.......it was a great vision to write.......so happy it touched you.......thank you precious soul.......purple luv......hugs & prayers your way xo :)
Re. Heaven In My Arms
29th Mar 2016 6:01pm
this is more beautiful than the Hallmark card... more sweeter than any candy in the world... this piece is absolutely marvelous flower... i enjoyed it *hugs* :D
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Re: Re. Heaven In My Arms
30th Mar 2016 1:18am
Hi Magic......alwayss thrilled to see your smile upon my page.......your words touch me.......will admit this gave me a beautiful feeling while writing it......thank you for the honor of the RL add on.......purple luv & hugs xo :)