paschal

never could do haiku. hats off to anyone who can

Well, any man who still tips his hat is a gentleman in my book.
*curtsies back*
lol
Thank you.

I had to read this many times before understanding. One of the best Haiku I have read. Cannot wtrte them myself. Thankyou.

Thank you, Kexby and bright shining one.

Kexby, I think Haiku is an important lesson in the selection
of words that pack the most punch in the least amount.
I try to write at least one haiku a week, but sometimes
get carried into a Renku!

Tight piece.....Write On!!!

Beautiful...love this

come again..?    :)

no, but seriously,
the image revolves
around the thought,
and the thought
decides the form...

How beautiful is your penfulness.. .
no words just going to absorb.

-Howlings

moon rules the garden.
pretty...

is addicting to read to grasp the atomic undertones, you're such a prismatic poet Ahavati, exquisite...

i wanna stroll across the ocean to The Moon with ye, love.

….beauty in such few words! Lovely haikus, Ahavati! :)