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"In This Life"
being luved by you
is my treasure in life
a blessing to behold
deep within my heart
was imprisoned
by self negativity
with just one touch
you set my tears free
you've removed
all emptiness in me
making my dreams
all come true
climbed many mountains
not knowing where
I was wandering thru life
lost within my own doubt
you've taken my heart
held it crossing raging rivers
met me on the mountain top
your luv never failed
I'm so extremely blessed
each and everyday cause.....
In my life I'm luved by YOU
Song ~
"In This Life" ~ By Collin Raye
http://youtu.be/pOKqidAsRTs
Thank you God & Bee for luving me xo :)
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
is my treasure in life
a blessing to behold
deep within my heart
was imprisoned
by self negativity
with just one touch
you set my tears free
you've removed
all emptiness in me
making my dreams
all come true
climbed many mountains
not knowing where
I was wandering thru life
lost within my own doubt
you've taken my heart
held it crossing raging rivers
met me on the mountain top
your luv never failed
I'm so extremely blessed
each and everyday cause.....
In my life I'm luved by YOU
Song ~
"In This Life" ~ By Collin Raye
http://youtu.be/pOKqidAsRTs
Thank you God & Bee for luving me xo :)
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 23rd Mar 2016
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23rd Mar 2016 2:59am
23rd Mar 2016 3:02am
Awe SS....beautiful words from a special sweet soul......thank you.....He's definetely looks after me......appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
23rd Mar 2016 7:20am
This is what love is - over and over again Flowergirl- a great and timely reminder
23rd Mar 2016 7:52pm
Hey Whale......always a pleasure for your smile and kindness upon my page.......you're right......just how it's suppose to be......thank you for the visit......purple luv & hugs xo :)
23rd Mar 2016 7:55am
23rd Mar 2016 7:54pm
Hey JJ......just hard this song yesterday and fell in luved it......I'm not allowed to post the video on here so I left the link......thank you for your smile and encouragement......it's all worthwhile for sure......purple luv & hugs xo :)
23rd Mar 2016 8:50am
23rd Mar 2016 7:55pm
Hey Kavick my amazing friend......you know I'm thankful for you always......purple luv & hugs xo :)
23rd Mar 2016 11:22am
23rd Mar 2016 7:56pm
HI Glow......thank you so much.....glad you enjoyed this......appreciate the smile you bring upon my heart.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
23rd Mar 2016 4:23pm
What a wonderful poetical thought process you have given us.
To write your "feelings" as though they were poured out from
your heart on a romantic, moonlight night. You passionate
romantic you!
To write your "feelings" as though they were poured out from
your heart on a romantic, moonlight night. You passionate
romantic you!
23rd Mar 2016 7:59pm
Hi SG......what a beautiful smile you've shared with me........yes I'm a romantic......probably my biggest flaw......LOL!! Thank you for the visit......purple luv & hugs xo :)
23rd Mar 2016 7:40pm
I really loved this - would have liked the last stanza to be 4 lines like the rest of the stanzas but that's just a minor moan (lol)
23rd Mar 2016 8:00pm
Hey David.......I was un decided about the end to be truthful......I might work on that.....thank you for your honesty.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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24th Mar 2016 00:15am
Awe Sweet S......you make me tear up......I'm humbled from your words......you are a poetess that renders beautiful tenderness in every writte......bowing to your effection and smile upon my page......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
24th Mar 2016 8:04pm
I luv this Flower! Your friend came to your rescue and I'm sure you went to his. Your natural imagery is always so inspired:
"you've taken my heart
held it crossing raging rivers
met me on the mountain top
your luv never failed"
Impressive, but not as lovely as a single Flower. Fine work!
"you've taken my heart
held it crossing raging rivers
met me on the mountain top
your luv never failed"
Impressive, but not as lovely as a single Flower. Fine work!
26th Mar 2016 00:15am
Awe Crow......you're such a blessing to me......thank you for your always awesome words and smile......rescued each other indeed......there is no mistake in the souls you meet......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Mar 2016 12:37pm
Always the romantic, n always so much sweetness spills from within! Dear flower u deserve ur happiness :)
26th Mar 2016 00:19am
Awe Poet......you're such a blessing as well......always here with a smile.......thank you my sweet friend......I appreciate your kindness......purple luv & hugs xo :)
26th Mar 2016 00:24am
HI Wally.....glad this touched you........it very peaceful to write......happy you liked the pic.....I luv using pics......adds to the feeling of the write......appreciate your smile upon my page......purple smiles & hugs xo :)
29th Mar 2016 7:51am
It’s such a joyful and amazing feeling to be loved, feel loved and truly know you’re genuinely loved by someone special. The evidence is printed neatly between the lines. ;)
30th Mar 2016 1:22am
Sexy Rain.......you've brought tears to my heart.......it's truly an awesome feeling.......to know your words are valued......that your luv doesn't go unappreciated.......it's taken by another heart and held sweetly......cherished like a treasure of a rare jewel.......you just inspired me.......thank you for your touching words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Apr 2016 5:32pm
you have the essence
of poetic sense
when it comes essentially
to purples love poetry
so many shed tears of joy
flowery
know ye
of poetic sense
when it comes essentially
to purples love poetry
so many shed tears of joy
flowery
know ye
6th Apr 2016 00:39am
Hey Again.......honored by your words.......appreciate your kind support.......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
