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Crime
Prelude to Punishment
That wicked little bitch, rose up inside of me
When
i saw Him sitting there, Hard at work one day
i flicked my hair and sauntered over
To sit across from Him.
And that wicked little bitch
winked suggestivly
As
He arched one perfect eyebrow
leaning back in His chair He asked,
“What do you think you're up to?”
“do You really need to ask, or can't You take a hint?”
And that wicked little bitch
rolled her eyes dismissively
because
i thought He'd take the bait
But He was much to clever for that
Shrugged and looked away from me.
“I'm much too tired tonight”
And that wicked little bitch
Giggled in glee
Asking
“What's the matter baby, i thought You were a MAN.”
i saw the glint in His eyes, when He looked at me
"Or is it that i'm too much for You to handle?”
And that wicked little bitch
Purred with victory.
That wicked little bitch, rose up inside of me
When
i saw Him sitting there, Hard at work one day
i flicked my hair and sauntered over
To sit across from Him.
And that wicked little bitch
winked suggestivly
As
He arched one perfect eyebrow
leaning back in His chair He asked,
“What do you think you're up to?”
“do You really need to ask, or can't You take a hint?”
And that wicked little bitch
rolled her eyes dismissively
because
i thought He'd take the bait
But He was much to clever for that
Shrugged and looked away from me.
“I'm much too tired tonight”
And that wicked little bitch
Giggled in glee
Asking
“What's the matter baby, i thought You were a MAN.”
i saw the glint in His eyes, when He looked at me
"Or is it that i'm too much for You to handle?”
And that wicked little bitch
Purred with victory.
Written by
Riotgirl
(Slytly)
Published 20th Mar 2016
| Edited 24th Mar 2016
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Re. Crime
20th Mar 2016 7:53am
I loved it. You put him in his place. I love it when a woman asserts her dominance over a man. ;-)
John
John
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Re: Re. Crime
20th Mar 2016 5:42pm
Thank you Myst! That dominance was short lived... Which was entirely the intended outcome. I do so love getting my way. I'm very glad to hear that you love it.
Re. Crime
20th Mar 2016 9:54am
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20th Mar 2016 5:44pm
Re. Crime
20th Mar 2016 2:22pm
laughing, madly...
I love this wonderful little vignette...
really good write
I love this wonderful little vignette...
really good write
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Re. Crime
20th Mar 2016 5:52pm
Haha hepcat, I laughed too when it was all said and done. Always getting myself into more trouble. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Xo
Re. Crime
21st Mar 2016 8:37pm
Re. Crime
The anatomy of seduction. I love the dialog and imagery in this piece, Brava!
Oh, I think you probably meant clever rather than cleaver, OUCH!
Oh, I think you probably meant clever rather than cleaver, OUCH!
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24th Mar 2016 6:21am
Re: Re. Crime
24th Mar 2016 7:54am
Believe me I am typically not the spelling police I just thought why not make a great poet greater still :)
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Re. Crime
29th Mar 2016 8:40am
Wicked indeed... makes one onder if crime does pay, at the end of the day...
JJ
JJ
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Re. Crime
13th Apr 2016 6:56am
So, were you going to sleep with the guy, rob or kill him? Or all of the above?
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Re. Crime
27th May 2016 00:20am
That wicked little bitch sounds like she's got a lot more life to her than the "He" of this write. Sounds like an arrogant prick to me. This is solid, tough writing and a lot of fun. Every reason to purr with victory, Riotgirl..
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Re. Crime
27th May 2016 1:20am
Oh thank you, darling crow. He was an arrogant prick! However, looking back I do believe he was baiting me all along. I can never tell who was actually the mastermind behind our encounters.
Im glad you enjoyed it, sugar. Your praise has me purring yet again.
Xox
Im glad you enjoyed it, sugar. Your praise has me purring yet again.
Xox
Re. Crime
21st Aug 2016 8:18pm
Very provocative...the Wicked little bitch part drew me in. Very mischievous vibe to it...kinda playful, but kinda evil. Lol!! Nice write!
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