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all the cutesy shit I don't say
If I haven't said
That one look my away
Melts me into a puddle
It does
If you didn't know you kissed me
To where my head is spinning
And I feel left speechless
You have
If I haven't looked
And said you're feckin adorable
And I wanna cuddle you like a teddy bear
I do
If I act crazy
Like I want to be around you always
I'm sorry... I'm trying not to
but I want you
That one look my away
Melts me into a puddle
It does
If you didn't know you kissed me
To where my head is spinning
And I feel left speechless
You have
If I haven't looked
And said you're feckin adorable
And I wanna cuddle you like a teddy bear
I do
If I act crazy
Like I want to be around you always
I'm sorry... I'm trying not to
but I want you
Published 17th Mar 2016
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17th Mar 2016 8:49am
18th Mar 2016 5:37am
hullo
grand job. structure looks good, your line breaks bring emphasis to your thoughts. you've a consistent voice, nice flow and you've said what you want to say in a simple from the heart way. check away at the end of the second line
good stuff, fair play
grand job. structure looks good, your line breaks bring emphasis to your thoughts. you've a consistent voice, nice flow and you've said what you want to say in a simple from the heart way. check away at the end of the second line
good stuff, fair play
