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Sweet Release
Nimble fingers
Quickly moving
Dripping blood from each cut
Going over the blade
That has ripped flesh
Pieces falling to the ground
Screaming she claws again
At the razors embedded in her side.
Fevered frenzy with each slice
Releasing pain and easing anger
As she's tearing through each layer
Quickly moving
Dripping blood from each cut
Going over the blade
That has ripped flesh
Pieces falling to the ground
Screaming she claws again
At the razors embedded in her side.
Fevered frenzy with each slice
Releasing pain and easing anger
As she's tearing through each layer
Published 4th Jul 2011
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2011 6:14am
This had the makings of a cutting poem, but it's more than just that, I'm sure. I felt like there needed to be more though. I wanted to keep reading by the end of the last stanza. ^_^
6th Jul 2011 2:14pm
Right on point again, definitely more than that. I'm sure you'll begin to see to the more I write. :)
