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Home At Last
cocaine blues
wishful truth
paying dues
lacking proof
under fire
lone bullet
simple desire
losing it
anger rules
chains binding
ignorant fools
motions rewinding
demonic cell
eternal enemy
saints fail
in blasphemy
antichrist
smoking mirror
love bites
reflection clearer
syphon hope
from guilt
hanging rope
guidelines tilt
without balance
falling fast
sacred dance
home at last
wishful truth
paying dues
lacking proof
under fire
lone bullet
simple desire
losing it
anger rules
chains binding
ignorant fools
motions rewinding
demonic cell
eternal enemy
saints fail
in blasphemy
antichrist
smoking mirror
love bites
reflection clearer
syphon hope
from guilt
hanging rope
guidelines tilt
without balance
falling fast
sacred dance
home at last
Published 12th Mar 2016
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12th Mar 2016 1:19pm
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12th Mar 2016 7:42pm
Dave, you have this magic touch that hooks the reader and pulls them in. Bravo. Really enjoyed this stanza
"demonic cell
eternal enemy
saints fail
in blasphemy "
excellent wording
"demonic cell
eternal enemy
saints fail
in blasphemy "
excellent wording
12th Mar 2016 7:53pm
Thanks, Hades.. means a lot to me.. i think you're a brilliant writer.. and i hear music to your words.. awesome job brother... i'm glad you dug this..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
12th Mar 2016 10:13pm
At home at last.
Hmm, I totally get it,
yes I do.
Wsened one you are.
Hmm, I totally get it,
yes I do.
Wsened one you are.
12th Mar 2016 10:19pm
