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Eating Your Heart
I'd like to eat your heart
Rip it, right from your chest
I wouldn't bother with cooking it
Raw would be the best
I'd like to taste your blood
Mingle it with mine
Feeling it run down my throat
Would almost be Devine
I wonder if you would taste salty
Heaven knows your heart would be tough
I'd only be returning the favor
And yes, it would be rough
I like to think of it This way
If I were to eat your heart
I'd always have a piece of you with me
Inside me, never to part
Rip it, right from your chest
I wouldn't bother with cooking it
Raw would be the best
I'd like to taste your blood
Mingle it with mine
Feeling it run down my throat
Would almost be Devine
I wonder if you would taste salty
Heaven knows your heart would be tough
I'd only be returning the favor
And yes, it would be rough
I like to think of it This way
If I were to eat your heart
I'd always have a piece of you with me
Inside me, never to part
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9th Mar 2016 10:41pm
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Anonymous
10th Mar 2016 2:03am
Wow Glow.......what a great write......dark yet an edge of sexy......enjoying your talent......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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10th Mar 2016 2:05am
Re. Eating Your Heart
10th Mar 2016 2:36am
this begins like zombie poetry, but ends as dark romance.
'eating the heart': I spoke of it once. you might enjoy this:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/121875-plain-girl/
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'eating the heart': I spoke of it once. you might enjoy this:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/121875-plain-girl/
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Re: Re. Eating Your Heart
10th Mar 2016 3:34am
Thank you for reading and commenting John! I'll be sure to check out your link.;)
Re. Eating Your Heart
10th Mar 2016 3:28am
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10th Mar 2016 3:35am
Re. Eating Your Heart
10th Mar 2016 3:39am
love the dark in this.also the part when u said ..I'd like to eat your heart
Rip it, right from your chest
I wouldn't bother with cooking it
Raw would be the best
I'd like to taste your blood
Mingle it with mine
Feeling it run down my throat
Would almost be Devine
that was my fav part.good job glow
Rip it, right from your chest
I wouldn't bother with cooking it
Raw would be the best
I'd like to taste your blood
Mingle it with mine
Feeling it run down my throat
Would almost be Devine
that was my fav part.good job glow
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10th Mar 2016 3:45am