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If I Would Let Myself Tell You
If I would let myself tell you
Where I’ve come and gone
If I would let myself tell you
How far I have run
If I would let myself tell you
Where I now stand
Then maybe you could help me
And tell me you understand
If I would let myself tell you
About my hidden, darkened fears
If I would let myself tell you
Of my struggles through the years
If I would let myself tell you
My joy of breaking through
Then maybe you could help me
Continue what I do
If I would let myself tell you
Of the battles in my heart
If I would let myself tell you
What shatters me apart
If I would let myself tell you
How fragile I can be
Then maybe you could help me
Escape and just be free
If I would let myself tell you
Why I struggle with each word
If I would let myself tell you
How I’m scared of being heard
If I would let myself tell you
That I wish I could let go
Then maybe you could help me
Because then you would know
If I would let myself tell you
Then all this could disappear
If I would let myself tell you
Then you’d see me crystal clear
If I would let myself tell you
Then at least my tears would flow
Just maybe, maybe now
I’ll allow you to know
written by Devorah Zolotarev
Where I’ve come and gone
If I would let myself tell you
How far I have run
If I would let myself tell you
Where I now stand
Then maybe you could help me
And tell me you understand
If I would let myself tell you
About my hidden, darkened fears
If I would let myself tell you
Of my struggles through the years
If I would let myself tell you
My joy of breaking through
Then maybe you could help me
Continue what I do
If I would let myself tell you
Of the battles in my heart
If I would let myself tell you
What shatters me apart
If I would let myself tell you
How fragile I can be
Then maybe you could help me
Escape and just be free
If I would let myself tell you
Why I struggle with each word
If I would let myself tell you
How I’m scared of being heard
If I would let myself tell you
That I wish I could let go
Then maybe you could help me
Because then you would know
If I would let myself tell you
Then all this could disappear
If I would let myself tell you
Then you’d see me crystal clear
If I would let myself tell you
Then at least my tears would flow
Just maybe, maybe now
I’ll allow you to know
written by Devorah Zolotarev
Published 8th Mar 2016
| Edited 10th Mar 2016
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Anonymous
8th Mar 2016 7:03am
discerning when to close ourselves protectively and when to open up is not easy, and we often choose wrong and learn new lessons.
this tells of an internal struggle we all face at times and can relate to. There's some deep self discovery in a lot of it too.
If I would let myself tell you
Why I struggle with each word
If I would let myself tell you
How I’m scared of being heard
If I would let myself tell you
That I wish I could let go
Then maybe you could help me
Because then you would know
^^^that stanza is my fav. well done :)
this tells of an internal struggle we all face at times and can relate to. There's some deep self discovery in a lot of it too.
If I would let myself tell you
Why I struggle with each word
If I would let myself tell you
How I’m scared of being heard
If I would let myself tell you
That I wish I could let go
Then maybe you could help me
Because then you would know
^^^that stanza is my fav. well done :)
thank u.it not my poem I thought it was a very outgoing and to my life that I would share it who wrote it is BTW As You All Know Or Going To Know.i had copyed some poets work.Look The Reason I Did That Was Because I can peronly can relate to them, I know I should of say the names on who wrote them and put it as that I haven't wrote this and said I copyed it to just a relate to this for my life.
I'm not the the best poem writer,The Only Reason I Started Writing Is Because Of My Dad, He Pasted Away Sep @5 And That's The Only Reason I Write Today. I Know I Made A Mistakes But You Know What Im Only Human And I'm I'm Fixing My Mistakes As We Speak. So If You Have A Issue With It Please Feel Free To message Me
I'm not the the best poem writer,The Only Reason I Started Writing Is Because Of My Dad, He Pasted Away Sep @5 And That's The Only Reason I Write Today. I Know I Made A Mistakes But You Know What Im Only Human And I'm I'm Fixing My Mistakes As We Speak. So If You Have A Issue With It Please Feel Free To message Me
Anonymous
10th Mar 2016 10:49am
I liked it so much, and I just spoke with the writer who actually wrote it..in 2014!
She isn't thrilled.
http://www.chabad.org/theJewishWoman/article_cdo/aid/1680938/jewish/If-I-Would-Let-Myself-Tell-You.htm
what a let down you are to our site..
She isn't thrilled.
http://www.chabad.org/theJewishWoman/article_cdo/aid/1680938/jewish/If-I-Would-Let-Myself-Tell-You.htm
what a let down you are to our site..
Anonymous
10th Mar 2016 10:49am
I liked it so much, and I just spoke with the writer who actually wrote it..in 2014!
She isn't thrilled.
http://www.chabad.org/theJewishWoman/article_cdo/aid/1680938/jewish/If-I-Would-Let-Myself-Tell-You.htm
what a let down you are to our site..
She isn't thrilled.
http://www.chabad.org/theJewishWoman/article_cdo/aid/1680938/jewish/If-I-Would-Let-Myself-Tell-You.htm
what a let down you are to our site..
have u read my profile I just said it isn't my poem. I 100% relate to this poem. I know I should of said that but damn im only human. I'm fixing my mistake now.And Again I'm Not A Let Down To Our Site. I Love This Poem And A Few More And Also Can Relate.There People Go Judgeing Me. If Im Bad For This Site I Delete My Account. the only reason I write is because of my dad,he has been gone since sep 25. tired of people thinking im the bad one when all I did was made a mistake. like damn I'm fixing it.so damn
Anonymous
10th Mar 2016 6:47pm
you plagiarized the entries in both my competitions, the authors aren't happy.
I write on one of the sites you stole from. You are clearly a liar and deleting your account won't be necessary.
stealing from writers is enough to get banned....I don't care what you've added to your profile.
I liked you and took time, NO, wasted time reading your (their) work. I commented and you said thank you!
You need help.
I write on one of the sites you stole from. You are clearly a liar and deleting your account won't be necessary.
stealing from writers is enough to get banned....I don't care what you've added to your profile.
I liked you and took time, NO, wasted time reading your (their) work. I commented and you said thank you!
You need help.
10th Mar 2016 7:04pm
I understand your upset.and if I get banned I understand. I agree with u 100% but at the same time. the poets has the right to be mad at me,i didn't do it do make it as my work I did it because I relate to there work. now it wasn't right that I should of said who write it and stuff like that. but u also have to know wherer im coming from to. all I can do is make things right. if u don't whanna read my poem or what nothing to do with it I 100% understand
Anonymous
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15th Mar 2016 1:09am
I Understand People Is Upset I Didn't Do It For My Own Write I Did it Because I Can Relate To The Poet. I Do Apologize. I Fixed My Mistake I Said I Was Sorry. And That's All I Can Do .Btw Crystal Love Your Poems.And Again I Apologize once again.
