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7th Mar 2016 5:53pm
"Summertime, and the livin' is easy. Fish are jumpin' and the cotton is high."
Great imagery, Jemac.
Great imagery, Jemac.
9th Mar 2016 2:41am
8th Mar 2016 4:52am
that's a great start to an exciting story,
you could've extended this.
the way she's dressed will make the heat a lot hotter...
you could've extended this.
the way she's dressed will make the heat a lot hotter...
9th Mar 2016 2:43am
Thank You JohnFeddeler for the read and the thought of extending it, I will take that under consideration ... much appreciated ....
