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She
When your words find me
They always curve in like heat seeking explosives
Crumbling this unfinished wall
I am left naked
With a spotlight
Drenching me in vulnerability
They always curve in like heat seeking explosives
Crumbling this unfinished wall
I am left naked
With a spotlight
Drenching me in vulnerability
Published 2nd Jul 2011
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Anonymous
2nd Jul 2011 4:16pm
I think I prefer your shorter to your longer pieces. This one is up there with your best as an atmospheric, stripped down and raw poem.
2nd Jul 2011 5:39pm
10th Jul 2011 12:07pm
