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SHE AT THE WINDOW
Head slightly bowed
closed eyes gaze into new worlds
shimmering tresses
made golden by the soft morning light
cascade over lamentably concealed shoulders
framing perfect burgeoning breasts
seeming to cry out for undivided attention
barely contained by a partially unbuttoned shirt
Who or what captivates her day dreaming?
perhaps the coupling of words she will use
to paint her next erotic adventure
or maybe fertile contemplation
of what to plant in Spring
possibly thoughts of where on her curvaceous delight
to ink the next sexy tattoo
succulent ruby lips whisper an invitation
to float down her stream of consciousness
sure to make the most callous soul beg to be lost
forever stranded in such ecstasy
closed eyes gaze into new worlds
shimmering tresses
made golden by the soft morning light
cascade over lamentably concealed shoulders
framing perfect burgeoning breasts
seeming to cry out for undivided attention
barely contained by a partially unbuttoned shirt
Who or what captivates her day dreaming?
perhaps the coupling of words she will use
to paint her next erotic adventure
or maybe fertile contemplation
of what to plant in Spring
possibly thoughts of where on her curvaceous delight
to ink the next sexy tattoo
succulent ruby lips whisper an invitation
to float down her stream of consciousness
sure to make the most callous soul beg to be lost
forever stranded in such ecstasy
Published 2nd Mar 2016
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2nd Mar 2016 4:33am
My my my!
You've created such a beautiful write my friend! Every word was simply amazing!
Huge like! 😊
You've created such a beautiful write my friend! Every word was simply amazing!
Huge like! 😊
2nd Mar 2016 5:24am
Tommie, it's partially your creation. Your photo is so beautiful...the words came easy. Thank you!
2nd Mar 2016 1:34pm
What an honor to be able to bring inspiration. Although you're SO good at what you do you didn't need me.I'm so flattered that you put words to the picture. As I was reading I thought, "Hmm, this reads/looks so familiar" and then I realized I was reading my picture.
This brought me such joy!
Everything you create is beautiful and thoughtful, you bring a huge smile to my face and warmth to my heart! Thank you GW, you rock! 😊
This brought me such joy!
Everything you create is beautiful and thoughtful, you bring a huge smile to my face and warmth to my heart! Thank you GW, you rock! 😊
2nd Mar 2016 10:20pm
It is so You, TL. Yes your pic does make you look as if you are in a window 'tittie'-lating the passing viewer.
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framing perfect burgeoning breasts
seeming to cry out for undivided attention
barely contained by a partially unbuttoned shirt
Favourite lines:
framing perfect burgeoning breasts
seeming to cry out for undivided attention
barely contained by a partially unbuttoned shirt
2nd Mar 2016 11:11pm
3rd Mar 2016 8:24am
Leaves space for a lot of thoughts and dreams about her and her purposes. You painted a vivid picture with your words.
3rd Mar 2016 4:45pm
Thank you Miss Chi! I appreciate your comments regarding space. Sometimes I worry that I am too literal, not provoking enough independent thought from the reader....that space is important.
3rd Mar 2016 12:02pm
3rd Mar 2016 4:49pm
Thank you Katja! The photo just really inspired me. The light is so perfect and the shadows so provocative, Merci ma amie!
4th Mar 2016 00:06am
4th Mar 2016 00:30am
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9th Mar 2016 10:44pm
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9th Mar 2016 11:05pm
Very beautifully crafted poem laced with lovely imagery and flows beautifully from start to finished.thanks for sharing your inspiration a delight and pleasure to read.
Sharon
Sharon
28th Feb 2017 7:38pm
Thank you Sharon! I enjoyed revisiting this piece as well. I've been kind of in a funk of late.
