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~Anticipate
She was like a hot rock
with sweet lips
He wanted her to warm
his fingertips
To taste her soft sugary
kisses
She was a quiet sigh after a
sultry whisper
He could feel her exhale sweep
his throbbing heart
with sweet lips
He wanted her to warm
his fingertips
To taste her soft sugary
kisses
She was a quiet sigh after a
sultry whisper
He could feel her exhale sweep
his throbbing heart
Published 1st Mar 2016
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1st Mar 2016 3:37pm
1st Mar 2016 3:01pm
1st Mar 2016 3:37pm
1st Mar 2016 6:41pm
That's quite a beautiful piece TL. I love those last two lines especially.
John
John
2nd Mar 2016 00:43am
1st Mar 2016 7:00pm
Very sweet and sensual work Tommie.
"She was a quiet sigh after a
sultry whisper
He could feel her exhale sweep
his throbbing heart "
The lady here is gentle and I would avidly anticipate her every move. Excellent work complete with sultry whisper.....
"She was a quiet sigh after a
sultry whisper
He could feel her exhale sweep
his throbbing heart "
The lady here is gentle and I would avidly anticipate her every move. Excellent work complete with sultry whisper.....
2nd Mar 2016 00:46am
2nd Mar 2016 00:48am
Thank you W, your comments are very much appreciated. And thanks for reading me 😊
3rd Mar 2016 10:32pm
This is hot.
"He wanted her to warm
his fingertips "
you got that right!
"He wanted her to warm
his fingertips "
you got that right!
