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An uneasy task
`~,,~`
The heaviness,
Staying,
Living upon this side of the divide,
An uneasy task
the will to go on often wished upon
The places you now tread
Like hell I can ever follow
Not while the gates still stand
```~~~,,~~~```
The final piece left for me
Still a love for you,
A staccato of mixtures, played in a loop cycle
Radiated with temperance and fortitudes of resentment
```~~~… … …~~~```
The heaviness,
Staying,
Living upon this side of the divide,
An uneasy task
the will to go on often wished upon
The places you now tread
Like hell I can ever follow
Not while the gates still stand
```~~~,,~~~```
The final piece left for me
Still a love for you,
A staccato of mixtures, played in a loop cycle
Radiated with temperance and fortitudes of resentment
```~~~… … …~~~```
Published 1st Mar 2016
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1st Mar 2016 2:23pm
Cling to that love brother to help keep that little shred of decency for you to keep giving us great poetry mine friend.
5th Mar 2016 12:33pm
Ahh, tryin man, it aint easy though... She went to her moms the last couple days, tis just me an the cat, Sophie hehehe... crazy times man, crazy crazy,,, I needed to be alone for this one, for a few...
1st Mar 2016 5:46pm
Intriguing write...fir meself I see in this your partner in a bout of depression, leave you behind that kinda divide as all you can do is look on....hold on
The dark undertones are just beautiful :)
The dark undertones are just beautiful :)
5th Mar 2016 12:30pm
Dark undertones, dig that, gonna have to steal that one man hehehe... Sorry bout the late reply, have been real bad lately bout replyin... One o those dark cycles, makes it hard to even reply at times... wow 5:30 am, Gonna have to crashout soon in a bit... hehehe
2nd Mar 2016 10:13am
5th Mar 2016 12:27pm
Yeah it does man, not much in life worse than it... Thanks man ,sorry bout the late delay, I really have no concept of time hehe...
