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new day~
the darkness became a promise of
mystic love
pressed against one another until
there was nothing left of us
and the morning becomes an invitation
for a new day~
mystic love
pressed against one another until
there was nothing left of us
and the morning becomes an invitation
for a new day~
Published 1st Mar 2016
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1st Mar 2016 4:30am
1st Mar 2016 3:28pm
1st Mar 2016 5:39am
& further erotic pleasure thru the day & into the night.
keep up the sexiness, Tommie...
keep up the sexiness, Tommie...
1st Mar 2016 3:29pm
1st Mar 2016 8:13am
Written by one who knows to appreciate each new day and sensually embraces each night . Brava bella poeta!
1st Mar 2016 3:30pm
1st Mar 2016 9:52pm
You are always welcome :) BTW, sexy new profile pic...you photograph so well.
2nd Mar 2016 00:37am
1st Mar 2016 7:41pm
There's mystery to your lines but the promise of illumination. This is brief but a thrill to read, an inspiration in fact. Excellent work Tommie!
2nd Mar 2016 00:39am
Thank you Crow for such a wonderful comment and for reading me. I appreciate it 😊
2nd Mar 2016 00:40am
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2nd Mar 2016 1:23pm
5th Mar 2016 4:35pm
Hey, I haven't been on for a while good to see u still have awesome way with words. ☺️
6th Mar 2016 2:25pm
