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Redemption
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Sat down next to me..
So lovey, so pretty.
Hazel eyes that spoke to me,
softly...yet intensely.
Chance meeting..not planned.
So glad to see..held your hand.
Time has passed..been so long.
Never meant to do you wrong.
Still the beauty that I knew,
So long ago when I lost you.
Time heals all wounds they say..
My heart is still broken this day.
For so long I have yearned to...
Just make it all up to you.
Needing this chance to say,
I have missed you everyday.
I have still loved you all this time.
Your scent..your smile..your mind.
Never allowing a memory to fade,
In my mind each detail stayed.
Never able to fully love another..
Your memory always there to smother.
Always trying to find another you..
Always failing...no matter who.
All alone after so many years.
That's the price of your tears.
Forgive and free me from this need.
Break this spell.. Of you ..I plead.
Or give me a chance to redeem....
....Your hand,
Your love,
My dream.
Sat down next to me..
So lovey, so pretty.
Hazel eyes that spoke to me,
softly...yet intensely.
Chance meeting..not planned.
So glad to see..held your hand.
Time has passed..been so long.
Never meant to do you wrong.
Still the beauty that I knew,
So long ago when I lost you.
Time heals all wounds they say..
My heart is still broken this day.
For so long I have yearned to...
Just make it all up to you.
Needing this chance to say,
I have missed you everyday.
I have still loved you all this time.
Your scent..your smile..your mind.
Never allowing a memory to fade,
In my mind each detail stayed.
Never able to fully love another..
Your memory always there to smother.
Always trying to find another you..
Always failing...no matter who.
All alone after so many years.
That's the price of your tears.
Forgive and free me from this need.
Break this spell.. Of you ..I plead.
Or give me a chance to redeem....
....Your hand,
Your love,
My dream.
Published 28th Feb 2016
| Edited 1st Mar 2016
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28th Feb 2016 10:53pm
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2nd Mar 2016 00:47am
Hello Ms Taryn,
I thank you for once again taking the time to give me a read. I am glad that you were able to relate. You are so correct about the parrells that our lives share. Thank you again sweetheart for you kind and understanding words.
Luvs
Keith
I thank you for once again taking the time to give me a read. I am glad that you were able to relate. You are so correct about the parrells that our lives share. Thank you again sweetheart for you kind and understanding words.
Luvs
Keith
29th Feb 2016 5:51am
My sweet southern gentlemen, your gentle heart is so easy to love.
You move me with your romanticism and the way you love so dang hard.
Time doesn’t really heal wounds, time only dilutes the pain to be bearable enough to move on.
Wounds tend to open when, loneliness, memories and momentary-aching pierce the scab.
But there comes a time when love is not enough. So many other factors and ingredients equates to accentuating the core of love.
My heart goes out to you sweety! Stay strong! xo
You move me with your romanticism and the way you love so dang hard.
Time doesn’t really heal wounds, time only dilutes the pain to be bearable enough to move on.
Wounds tend to open when, loneliness, memories and momentary-aching pierce the scab.
But there comes a time when love is not enough. So many other factors and ingredients equates to accentuating the core of love.
My heart goes out to you sweety! Stay strong! xo
Dearest Rain,
I think you have just about got me pegged. I was feeling a little lonely and came across a home movie and there she was. She inspired the write,
the circumstance of the breakup are not as it was written. I have never been able to stop loving her though...she will always have a home in my heart.
Keith
I think you have just about got me pegged. I was feeling a little lonely and came across a home movie and there she was. She inspired the write,
the circumstance of the breakup are not as it was written. I have never been able to stop loving her though...she will always have a home in my heart.
Keith
29th Feb 2016 12:22pm
Keith, I've said this time and time, I love your softer side! You're first love must have been a wonderful person who you still love. My heart sings that you actually found true love and aches because you lost it..excellent write my friend!💕Sissy
2nd Mar 2016 1:17am
Sissy,
I am so glad to hear from you sweetheart. I would like to thank you for your always kind words and the warmth that you always bring to my page.
Keith
I am so glad to hear from you sweetheart. I would like to thank you for your always kind words and the warmth that you always bring to my page.
Keith
29th Feb 2016 10:39pm
2nd Mar 2016 1:21am
Thank you Dean,
When it comes to those that we have truly loved the heart has a hell of a memory. Thanks for stopping by Dean.
Keith
When it comes to those that we have truly loved the heart has a hell of a memory. Thanks for stopping by Dean.
Keith
9th Mar 2016 1:36am
10th Mar 2016 2:52am
Loved this... So touching, we never forget the ones we've loved. Great write! Thanks for sharing.
-Karen
-Karen
