How do I say

some things don't need to be spoken.
this is a very attractive poem...

Lovely poem you have there sir.

Thanks John and Thorn for the comments. Gives me hope. This being my first post and all.

Great first piece ... It expresses a great deal of yearning yet is exquisitely simple in its presentation

How indeed? Maybe remembering that all boundaries are merely conventions,
and Love has none where soul recognition is concerned.

Beautifully conveyed through simple brevity.

Welcome to DUP.

Sounds like a tale of forbidden but heartbreaking love.