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What We Do
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I'm not giving up
neither are you
no towel or sponge
retreat or surrender
Toys thrown
this understanding of the moment
the intention to dream big
going the distance
in each others corner
And if the gods just pause for thought
It'll be as expected
The full distance covered
till the embrace welcomed
equal winners in love everytime
It's what we do
I'm not giving up
neither are you
no towel or sponge
retreat or surrender
Toys thrown
this understanding of the moment
the intention to dream big
going the distance
in each others corner
And if the gods just pause for thought
It'll be as expected
The full distance covered
till the embrace welcomed
equal winners in love everytime
It's what we do
Published 28th Feb 2016
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Child versus parent? Or are the thrown toys a wider metaphor?
Regardless I really like this poem Rose, I'm a sucker for a happy ending and your words bring this home beautifully.
Regardless I really like this poem Rose, I'm a sucker for a happy ending and your words bring this home beautifully.
2nd Mar 2016 2:02pm
4th Mar 2016 9:48pm
Phone typing does my grammar and spelling no favours! I have edited the above so hopefully it makes a little more sense now!
4th Mar 2016 9:55pm
