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First in Line
Friggin blue blood
straight laced
old school
I can't handle
all those jewels
so
po faced
undeserving
I don't need you
stuff the knighthood
up your jacksie
don't tell me
it's for queen and country
who needs cuntries anyway
you wont make one
outta me
even tho
you got me young
I'll be
first in line
for revolution
I'll keep
clawing
madly
at your statue
till its down
and you quit
sucking
all our nipples dry.
It's a silly little world
and we're sliding into space
a silly little world
and all your biggest
grandest
whitest mansions
they wont save you
watch me push you
now.
Published 25th Nov 2009
| Edited 19th Jul 2012
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25th Nov 2009 2:52pm
"Each time I write a poem I feel 5 years old." - Your profile
I think I hear the 5 year old pretty strongly in this, in a very good way. Life has a way of crushing the fight out of us, making us accept established unfairness, or at least attack it only with respectful disagreement. Not sure if it's your intent, but this reads to me like a simple, straightforward rejection of an unfairness that deserves it. A 5-year-old's simplicity with an older man's words.
I think I hear the 5 year old pretty strongly in this, in a very good way. Life has a way of crushing the fight out of us, making us accept established unfairness, or at least attack it only with respectful disagreement. Not sure if it's your intent, but this reads to me like a simple, straightforward rejection of an unfairness that deserves it. A 5-year-old's simplicity with an older man's words.
25th Nov 2009 5:25pm
If only we knew then....
but really I'm a simple anarchist angry about the royal family in Britain. I kinda think we have outgrown them now - too much inequality in this world generally.
Appreciate your words.
but really I'm a simple anarchist angry about the royal family in Britain. I kinda think we have outgrown them now - too much inequality in this world generally.
Appreciate your words.
