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~Once
~Once, you could start me up with your bare hands. You'd sit on my lap & call me baby.
~Once, i would purr for you & make your thighs quiver. You'd stop me on a back road just to star gaze.
~Once, the open field was our playground where we'd get down & dirty. Breaking all the rules.
~Once, you took so much pride in me. Always showing me off & now i belong to the earth.
(Photography by Tommie)
~Once, i would purr for you & make your thighs quiver. You'd stop me on a back road just to star gaze.
~Once, the open field was our playground where we'd get down & dirty. Breaking all the rules.
~Once, you took so much pride in me. Always showing me off & now i belong to the earth.
(Photography by Tommie)
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21st Feb 2016 2:34am
Re. ~Once
20th Feb 2016 4:51am
I have never been so envious of a torn up vinyl bench seat. I wax nostalgic for the smell of an old truck cab and when mixed with the intoxicating scent of a woman heaven is near. Bravisima Tommie girl!
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21st Feb 2016 2:35am
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20th Feb 2016 8:21am
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21st Feb 2016 2:36am
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20th Feb 2016 9:26am
Like the easy analogy of this now-derelict farm truck with a human lover.
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20th Feb 2016 1:18pm
Beautiful work here Tommie.
I am sorry it took me 8 months before reading your work. I think we all have felt that way about an object before but you sure made it feel like romance.
Keith
I am sorry it took me 8 months before reading your work. I think we all have felt that way about an object before but you sure made it feel like romance.
Keith
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21st Feb 2016 2:39am
No need to apologize Keith, I appreciate you reading me. I'm happy you like it. Thank you very much 😊
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21st Feb 2016 2:41am
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22nd Feb 2016 9:43am
you should do a whole series of these...wonderful writing...I would love to sit in that truck and just listen to it's memories
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22nd Feb 2016 2:33pm
A great idea SatansSperm, I agree!
Just to go down memory lane, to be apart of the stories would be neat. Thank you very much for reading me. 😊
Just to go down memory lane, to be apart of the stories would be neat. Thank you very much for reading me. 😊