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She was good for something besides
leaving her bare footprints
- in the moonlit dust
A twist in her dress revealed soft, plump
orbs while her kiss
- leaves my lips shining
The taste of divine beauty danced on
my tongue lightly
- fleeting pleasure infused
leaving her bare footprints
- in the moonlit dust
A twist in her dress revealed soft, plump
orbs while her kiss
- leaves my lips shining
The taste of divine beauty danced on
my tongue lightly
- fleeting pleasure infused
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Re. - Infused
20th Feb 2016 4:40am
Tommie. you evoke such sensual yearning with the images of silhouetted lovers embracing. Of voluptuous breasts bathed in soft moonlight and perhaps glistening from kisses, sucks and licks. Bravisima lady!
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22nd Feb 2016 2:51am
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20th Feb 2016 8:18am
gentle & soundless as the barefoot steps.
gentle as the kiss.
the kiss: so pleasant to be lost in that vision...
gentle as the kiss.
the kiss: so pleasant to be lost in that vision...
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22nd Feb 2016 2:52am
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Favourite line and a bit:
A twist in her dress revealed soft, plump
orbs
Lovely description of the female form here, easily imagine her to be a voluptuous figure. The romantic writer Elinor Glyn (notable for her red hair - which her heroines had) once had someone refer to her breasts as "amplitudes" in her heyday.
A twist in her dress revealed soft, plump
orbs
Lovely description of the female form here, easily imagine her to be a voluptuous figure. The romantic writer Elinor Glyn (notable for her red hair - which her heroines had) once had someone refer to her breasts as "amplitudes" in her heyday.
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22nd Feb 2016 2:53am
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20th Feb 2016 1:23pm
Tantalizing snapshot of a moment.
Just enough detail and passion to drive the imagination. Short enought to leave the reader wanting more. Enjoyed
Keith
Just enough detail and passion to drive the imagination. Short enought to leave the reader wanting more. Enjoyed
Keith
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Re: Re. - Infused
22nd Feb 2016 2:55am
Thank you Keith I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate you reading me and your kind word's 😊
Re. - Infused
21st Feb 2016 4:16am
The taste of divine beauty danced on
my tongue lightly
- fleeting pleasure infused
This was an pleasant and an poem filled
with an aloof (in a a good way) overtone
to it throughout Tommiel.
Enjoyable read... Pan
my tongue lightly
- fleeting pleasure infused
This was an pleasant and an poem filled
with an aloof (in a a good way) overtone
to it throughout Tommiel.
Enjoyable read... Pan
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22nd Feb 2016 2:56am
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