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Incompleted
Incomplete Souls
Two eyes,
to observe,
one mouth,
to talk less.
One mind
to preserve,
One heart's,
emotion suppressed.
Lest I speak,
what runs in thought.
I might just seek,
but it'll all be for nought.
You who see me,
through lidded eyes.
Can you free me,
from the barricade in my mind.
The voices,
concocted,
affection disrupted.
Loyalty corrupted,
sharing vulnerability
like chocolates.
Despised for nothing.
Reeling, and spinning,
nothingness crawling,
into corners, they hiding,
silently,
they keep watching.
The eyes that see
the fall.
The pain inside,
the dice rolls like a ball.
Commanding a total recall,
of a love that appeared
out of the thinness of our walls.
The walls that are built,
upon scars,
scars that stretch beyond
the distance of stars.
Crippled by that love,
chains behind bars.
We are an incomplete soul,
yearning from afar.
Two eyes,
to observe,
one mouth,
to talk less.
One mind
to preserve,
One heart's,
emotion suppressed.
Lest I speak,
what runs in thought.
I might just seek,
but it'll all be for nought.
You who see me,
through lidded eyes.
Can you free me,
from the barricade in my mind.
The voices,
concocted,
affection disrupted.
Loyalty corrupted,
sharing vulnerability
like chocolates.
Despised for nothing.
Reeling, and spinning,
nothingness crawling,
into corners, they hiding,
silently,
they keep watching.
The eyes that see
the fall.
The pain inside,
the dice rolls like a ball.
Commanding a total recall,
of a love that appeared
out of the thinness of our walls.
The walls that are built,
upon scars,
scars that stretch beyond
the distance of stars.
Crippled by that love,
chains behind bars.
We are an incomplete soul,
yearning from afar.
Published 19th Feb 2016
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19th Feb 2016 8:39pm
Thank You, Poetikmind.
That long distance thing,
is not for the faint of heart.
That long distance thing,
is not for the faint of heart.
19th Feb 2016 9:11pm
19th Feb 2016 10:05pm
It's hard but if you are willing to struggle through it it will be worth it all
19th Feb 2016 11:58pm
Some times... but not all the times.
There are times when It's better to let go.
There are times when It's better to let go.
21st Feb 2016 4:40pm
Sometimes they are ever so far, you have no choice but to let go...so beautiful and relatable...ox
26th Apr 2016 5:13am
Anonymous
6th Mar 2016 11:31pm
Love doesn't have to be painful. Who will give you the love you crave...I wonder. Nice writing.
26th Apr 2016 5:14am
Sometimes I wonder the same thing.
Thank you for reading.
Glad you enjoyed it.
^_^
Thank you for reading.
Glad you enjoyed it.
^_^
