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remains
Still recovering from that day
Tears
Another letter to completely take away the light of day
Darkness consumes my heart
I'm left to break completely fall apart
Red roses remind me of all the pain
Stuffed animals so gentle and cuddly
That day it was all taken away from me what you see is broken
All that remains of me
Tears
Another letter to completely take away the light of day
Darkness consumes my heart
I'm left to break completely fall apart
Red roses remind me of all the pain
Stuffed animals so gentle and cuddly
That day it was all taken away from me what you see is broken
All that remains of me
Published 18th Feb 2016
| Edited 17th Mar 2016
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I've read a lot of your recent poems. it's great that you're able to express such raw emotion in a poetic way. especially Mommy is here poem. to be honest, I haven't read this level of emotion in a while and it's hard to comment without sounding patronising
you could probably change complete to compleatly if your of the mind, but it's no big deal
this is poetry
fair play *hat tip*
you could probably change complete to compleatly if your of the mind, but it's no big deal
this is poetry
fair play *hat tip*
17th Mar 2016 4:30am
