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For Fuck Sake
I would if I could
But I can’t
So I won’t
I won’t even try
Cause I know
That I can’t
So what’s the point
Of the effort
To try
When I can’t
Or won’t
Do it
Why should I do it
For you
If I could
Cause I can’t
So I won’t
Do it
For you
or anyone else
why don’t you just leave me the fuck alone
for fuck sake
But I can’t
So I won’t
I won’t even try
Cause I know
That I can’t
So what’s the point
Of the effort
To try
When I can’t
Or won’t
Do it
Why should I do it
For you
If I could
Cause I can’t
So I won’t
Do it
For you
or anyone else
why don’t you just leave me the fuck alone
for fuck sake
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Re. For Fuck Sake
16th Feb 2016 1:07am
Re: Re. For Fuck Sake
17th Feb 2016 6:27pm
thank you so much - I love you poetic responses - you're such a smart ass, I think that's what I like about you the most :-)
Re. For Fuck Sake
16th Feb 2016 1:47am
Re: Re. For Fuck Sake
17th Feb 2016 6:29pm
yeah, sometimes it's just necessary - I do enjoy my own company from time to time :-)
thank you for reading and commenting - that's what keeps me going :-)
thank you for reading and commenting - that's what keeps me going :-)
Re. For Fuck Sake
16th Feb 2016 3:56am
Back with a vengeance! I think if you really wanted to be left alone, you would not have returned to tell us so...
Now get back to writing, it's been cold in here for weeks...
JJ
Now get back to writing, it's been cold in here for weeks...
JJ
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Re: Re. For Fuck Sake
17th Feb 2016 6:32pm
It is only sometimes that I like to be left alone especially after a stay in hospital and invasive surgery. As you pointed out i have returned and I really need the feedback and support I get here - It really keeps me going :-)
thank you :-)
thank you :-)
Re. For Fuck Sake
17th Feb 2016 5:55am
Fuck them indead. I've Ben one to roll down the slopes of life having to say that over and over! Like the style by way.
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Re: Re. For Fuck Sake
17th Feb 2016 6:33pm
thank you - so glad you liked it and took the time to comment - It was my recent stay in hospital and amputation which made me appreciate being in my own company from time to time :-)
Re. For Fuck Sake
19th Feb 2016 7:47pm
This was great, I have nothing to critique because I would change nothing. Awesome read!
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Re: Re. For Fuck Sake
19th Feb 2016 9:54pm
thank you for reading and such positive comments - its comments like this that keep me going :-)
Re. For Fuck Sake
20th Feb 2016 2:48am
Man, this really describes me tonight LOL
Taking the words right out of my brain..
Awesome write David!
Taking the words right out of my brain..
Awesome write David!
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Re: Re. For Fuck Sake
21st Feb 2016 4:43am
LOL it's a fascinating state of mind to be in that visits me regularly - good to know I am not alone :-)
thanks again, for reading and commenting :-)
thanks again, for reading and commenting :-)
Re. For Fuck Sake
21st Feb 2016 9:32pm
Enjoyed the read. I like my space too, so I can relate. Sometimes you just need time to yourself to process and recharge. It's nothing personal against anyone, and it sucks that people take it that way sometimes. I think all you can do is communicate that and hope they understand.
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