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Linger Within Me
thoughts of you linger within me
not in my mind....but in my heart
long after forever I will feel you
when the evening sun
bows to the rising moon
I reminisce holding your hand
stars reminds me of your eye's
beautiful crystals glistening in darkness
lighting my way thru the night
bringing you right next to me
how beautiful is our luv we share
blessed forever more to have found the other
thru the years how close we've become
bonded hearts together by stars above
purple one blinking that I'm thinking you
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
not in my mind....but in my heart
long after forever I will feel you
when the evening sun
bows to the rising moon
I reminisce holding your hand
stars reminds me of your eye's
beautiful crystals glistening in darkness
lighting my way thru the night
bringing you right next to me
how beautiful is our luv we share
blessed forever more to have found the other
thru the years how close we've become
bonded hearts together by stars above
purple one blinking that I'm thinking you
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 15th Feb 2016
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15th Feb 2016 7:03pm
So relatable and well written.
'when the evening sun
bows to the rising moon
I reminisce holding your hand '
such a lovely image.
'when the evening sun
bows to the rising moon
I reminisce holding your hand '
such a lovely image.
4th Mar 2016 00:38am
Hi Opheliac.......thrilled that you've stopped by to visit my page......glad you liked this piece......purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Feb 2016 8:08pm
if orphie said so
its lovely sunset
but absent of purple hue
makes
the sunset set
a bit too soon
as it bows to the moon
its lovely sunset
but absent of purple hue
makes
the sunset set
a bit too soon
as it bows to the moon
4th Mar 2016 00:39am
Hey Again......nice to see you.....thank you for your blessed smile upon my page.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Feb 2016 9:45pm
4th Mar 2016 00:40am
Awe.....thank you SS.....think that's my favorite too......always appreciate you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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4th Mar 2016 00:42am
Hi Sweet S......thank you for your beautiful words amd smile of course upon my page......you're always a blessing.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Feb 2016 3:59am
"long after forever I will feel you..."<--- Wow! Now that's a statement that needs it's own voice! Powerful!
Beautiful ink.... :)
Beautiful ink.... :)
Sweet Rain.......thank you.....you've made me smile.......I so luv your thoughts upon my page.......you encourage me greatly my sweet friend.....thank you for the poetic luv and friendship.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
16th Feb 2016 9:48am
This is truly one of your MANY very best! beautiful from start to finish flower... :)
4th Mar 2016 1:06am
Hey Poet......you always make me smile when you bring yourself to my page......I'm glad you liked this......thank you....purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Feb 2016 8:48pm
Beautifully written and love the imagery
dear... I have missed reading your
works... Have been away far to long...
Time to play catch up... =)
dear... I have missed reading your
works... Have been away far to long...
Time to play catch up... =)
4th Mar 2016 1:11am
Welcome back my friend......I'm glad you enjoy them.....I will make my way back to yours as well......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
4th Mar 2016 00:24am
4th Mar 2016 1:23am
Awe Again.....thank you my friend for a nice greeting back.....just needed took a break....all is well......purple luv & hugs xo :)
7th Mar 2016 00:35am
7th Mar 2016 00:50am
Awe thank you Harley.....you're making me lush with your generous words and beautiful smile you leave upon my pages.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
