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not in the mood...
and the city at night
is a fairground, in which
we've all been taken
for a ride...
so fuck all the lights
and the crowds and the
music, I'm looking for some
where to hide...
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Re. not in the mood...
12th Feb 2016 1:35am
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12th Feb 2016 2:01am
Re. not in the mood...
12th Feb 2016 1:41am
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Re. not in the mood...
12th Feb 2016 2:41am
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12th Feb 2016 11:50am
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Anonymous
12th Feb 2016 12:06pm
You need a field full of stars! There is great hiding there, but I warn you: you can't hide from yourself there.
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12th Feb 2016 12:19pm
Re. not in the mood...
12th Feb 2016 4:26pm
Re: Re. not in the mood...
12th Feb 2016 11:29pm
the ruins of a deserted castle, in one
of the more remote regions of wales..:)
of the more remote regions of wales..:)
Re. not in the mood...
13th Feb 2016 11:57pm
I love this. Beautiful and sad at the same time. The imagery of the city at night, the 'fairground', so vibrant and alive, juxtaposed with the desire to be anonymous. You do so much with so few words.
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Re: Re. not in the mood...
14th Feb 2016 00:33am
thanks, ed, some nights I really want
to be a part of it all,
but others, apart from it entirely...
to be a part of it all,
but others, apart from it entirely...
Re. not in the mood...
15th Feb 2016 9:29pm
I think we all need a hiding place - but then hiding is only good if its temporary - the daily fight goes on :-)
excellent ink
excellent ink
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15th Feb 2016 11:27pm