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Suffering Souls in Hell
The fight for sovereignty by them
that need, the show of power
through death are cursed for eternity
Howls of sufferers in eternal fire
the dead wants to live again
Scrapping at surface of concrete.
Underworld, within its darkness dwell
dead dreamers, decayed wishes, drifting souls
putrid with hatred, raging sulfuric hell.
Published 12th Feb 2016
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12th Feb 2016 8:49pm
Ambition descends into damnation it seems, and hatred perpetuates it. It's interesting that you don't mention Satan here. Maybe the Hell is one of our own making. Excellent work Grace!
12th Feb 2016 11:37pm
You got that right Crowfly. :) Sometimes we do create our own hell with our own capability to hate and kill just to subjugate or domineer others. Thanks for reading.
Anonymous
12th Feb 2016 9:19pm
Very Dark, but as usual well done
12th Feb 2016 11:38pm
15th Feb 2016 2:21am
"dead dreamers, decayed wishes, drifting souls " some people live their lives like this for decades.
Superbly written
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Superbly written
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